AndrewG70 Posted October 3, 2003 Share Posted October 3, 2003 I have created a logo for my stepmother's new business. The company will be making and selling promotional products. Check it out and let me know what you guys think of it.Check out the logo hereAndrew The (unofficial) NHL Uniform DatabaseThe WHA Uniform Database Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling84 Posted October 3, 2003 Share Posted October 3, 2003 The text wrapping up like that is kind of gimmicky and I dont care for it.The rest....not too shabby. I might downplay the arrows a bit or give them some sort of different angle so they dont look like clock hands. The Official Cheese-Filled Snack of NASCAR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tajmccall Posted October 10, 2003 Share Posted October 10, 2003 I agree with sterling here, i think the text wrap is...well yes, gimmicky.It detracts from what is an overall fine design.Sometimes something less literal than a monogram can be more successful for companies that do original, or at least quasi-creative things, such as marketing.But i dont wanna sound like im harping, because i do like it. Id try bringing the text down to the baseline, then maybe breaking up the d with the g and the c by spacing the stem on the lowercase d with the spacing between the rest of the letters. just a 2pt? white outline on the d to maintain consitancy with the spacing.I dont know, it might be too busy then though.just a few thoughts Store 1 Store 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STL FANATIC Posted October 10, 2003 Share Posted October 10, 2003 I like it. Looks like you've changed it though. I like em both. JUSTIN STRIEBEL | PORTFOLIO | RESUME | CONTACT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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