TwinsTerritory Posted July 17, 2008 Share Posted July 17, 2008 I like the basketball touch that you added... Twins-Territory.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EatSleepJeep Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 Newest Version:That's come along nicely. I think if you add some more detail to the tail and work on the shape of the acorn a little you can call it done. That's a basketball playing squirrel right there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 What do you mean shape? how? Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
socal_sharks_fan Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 I didnt know you were making the Minnesota Timbersquirrels with that paint job... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 I didnt know you were making the Minnesota Timbersquirrels with that paint job...how should I shadow it? Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
socal_sharks_fan Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 Im not sure...ask the pro guys... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 Okay Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 Im not sure...ask the pro guys...Wow...if you think so badly of yourself, why post?I like the latest logo, I think you need to continue the outline at the bottom, it looks incomplete. The basketball/acorn would look good as a secondary logo if it was cleaned up, but right now it looks like it was an afterthought.Ok, ways to make it better: I think the white shading looks odd (it looks good though) when paired with the head, which has no white shading. I don't know how you could fix it, maybe some white on the cheeks. I think the head might work by itself, though. The body might need some arms/legs, we don't want a quadruple amputee squirrel. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 Im not sure...ask the pro guys...Wow...if you think so badly of yourself, why post?I like the latest logo, I think you need to continue the outline at the bottom, it looks incomplete. The basketball/acorn would look good as a secondary logo if it was cleaned up, but right now it looks like it was an afterthought.Ok, ways to make it better: I think the white shading looks odd (it looks good though) when paired with the head, which has no white shading. I don't know how you could fix it, maybe some white on the cheeks. I think the head might work by itself, though. The body might need some arms/legs, we don't want a quadruple amputee squirrel.so... when you say "outline at the bottom, it looks incomplete", you mean make the body? Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w00tness Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 so... when you say "outline at the bottom, it looks incomplete", you mean make the body?That, or you could re-do the tail in a way that it completely hides behind the head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 18, 2008 Author Share Posted July 18, 2008 Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EatSleepJeep Posted July 18, 2008 Share Posted July 18, 2008 I like it. My only tweak: The acorn seems to be floating away. It has to be connected somehow. I'm just not smart/good enough to tell you how. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 21, 2008 Author Share Posted July 21, 2008 Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted July 21, 2008 Share Posted July 21, 2008 Nice. A few things:-clean up the edges. It will look much more professional. That goes for the acorn, too. Mainly, the black outline around the squirrel.-I'm not sure about the 2 grey colors.-The acorn still looks sort of misplaced. I don't know why. Here's what I would do: get rid of the acorn, and start a whole new alternate logo based on the acorn. Also, you might want to get rid of the "tic-tac-toe" effect on the top right of it.Overall, I am very impressed with this logo. I like that you added white to the cheeks, it seems to flow better, IMO. I am most impressed that you were able to take everyone's advice, and progress to a nice looking, almost finished design. The wordmark seems to work well, too.I don't know if you do uniforms, but I wouldn't mind seeing them. Especially since you are using vector, it's easy. If not, I might want to whip something up when I get back from vacation, on the 30th. Pm me if you want. I have a few ideas. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted July 21, 2008 Share Posted July 21, 2008 This is really coming together great! I think you have all the hard design work done now, and you can start refining. A few suggestions in that regard:The head looks a slight bit weasily to me, perhaps because of its width. You might get away really easily by simply scaling the entire head to make it longer. Your call, though - it really could work as is.The acorn still has that unfinished, just sketched look. The linework is too thin and uniform. I would use the same style you used for the outline around the eyes. As far as where to put the acorn in the logo, how about making it the "Q" in your wordmark. You could flip it upside down and make the stem the line that comes off the Q. Just take it as a suggestion.LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 21, 2008 Author Share Posted July 21, 2008 elliot, if you want to make a uniform for it that would be cool. Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhilliesPhan1325 Posted July 22, 2008 Share Posted July 22, 2008 I really like this logo and you've done a good job working on it in stages. "The 0-2 pitch... SWING AND A MISS! STRUCK HIM OUT! THE PHILADELPHIA PHILLIES ARE 2008 WORLD CHAMPIONS OF BASEBALL!" J M yoU wish you had a Duke Dog! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 22, 2008 Author Share Posted July 22, 2008 Here is a more sharp version: Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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