JayLo1112 Posted March 3, 2009 Share Posted March 3, 2009 A heavily awaited opening-day-game between the number one and two teams in the Yarmouth Wiffle Ball League.#1 Hilight Reel vs. #2 Raiders.This is my opening day logo. Tell me what you think.EDIT:UPDATE BELOWC+C Please. It would be very helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BJBerthiaume Posted March 3, 2009 Share Posted March 3, 2009 Looks like a logo that would be used for a movie theatre.I don't hate the logo, but I don't love it either. It is just meh right now. Those suggestions on the post above me are very helpful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TalktoChuck Posted March 3, 2009 Share Posted March 3, 2009 First off, the team names should be side by side so there is an equal presence in the logo. Right now it looks like the Hilightreel has the top billing, even before the Opening Day wordmark.The perspective on the 2009 does not match up with the part of the logo that it is on.Also Opening Day could be larger since this is an opening day patch. If you look at the sides of the logo the corners of the baseball diamond, one is larger than the other.The colors could be more cheerful, black is very depressing for an event.Couldn't have said it better myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsM29 Posted March 3, 2009 Share Posted March 3, 2009 Also, tone down the amount of fonts used. Right now I count 5 different fonts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayLo1112 Posted March 3, 2009 Author Share Posted March 3, 2009 Let me know what you think, I also have a version with the teams different fonts.C+C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayLo1112 Posted March 4, 2009 Author Share Posted March 4, 2009 Now this is much better! The colors look much better and separated evenly (very nice). The 2009 underneath the opening day title is very hard to read, but it looks like you fixed the perspective problem. Not really sure why the triangle around the Y.W.B.L. is black while you have this bevel look around everything else.Well done on this new concept.The triangle thing is just an out line without the bevel but it was an accident that a noticed after I uploaded it, but its fixed now.Thank you though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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