scottyvoodoo Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 Looking for some C+C here as I'm kinda stuck. The only thing someone has said is add blue but I'm not sure where or how. So any help would be great.For full disclosure it is based off this logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taantumus Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 Not that I know anything, but what bothers me:- the red text is too small, the last word is unreadable and league is almost- there are too many different fonts, and that little gradient in CHAMPIONSHIP in unnecessary- there's no outline on the building, but one around CHAMPIONSHIP, not a very unified look Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pwood Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 I'll echo everything taantumus mentioned, and also add that you probably aren't finding any place for the blue because there is so much black. It is dominating the logo. Also, I wouuld completely start over on the "Championship" part. Maybe make the beginning C and the ending P in the word larger than the rest and have the word stretch just a little beyond the dome of the building. Try the C and P on either side of the building's sides. Hopefully I explained that clearly enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loogodude90 Posted September 15, 2010 Share Posted September 15, 2010 My only real complaint is that the red font is too small. Other than that I think it looks good. WIZARDS ORIOLES CAPITALS RAVENS UNITED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottyvoodoo Posted September 15, 2010 Author Share Posted September 15, 2010 Updated a bit still willing to tweak it cause I'm wanting to improve this.- Dropped the gradient, and the outline around the text- Removed the league logo since it was to small- Changed the "championship" text to something more similar to what Pwood suggested Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottyvoodoo Posted September 17, 2010 Author Share Posted September 17, 2010 Bumping this with an update. Tweaked the text to include the league name since I couldn't find a way to work in the logo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
north dakota Posted September 17, 2010 Share Posted September 17, 2010 I kind of like it. Woah! You think I'm Cody? My name is Carl Scott Simone and we just happen to share a birthday. BIG DEAL. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted September 17, 2010 Share Posted September 17, 2010 I'd put the league name back in there in white (and a little bigger) and ditch the stroke on the stars. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taantumus Posted September 17, 2010 Share Posted September 17, 2010 The second one was more like it, the most recent is a bit confusing. You start wondering what does PlachampionshiP actually mean.Plus I'm not sure about the bigger first and last letters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omnivore Posted September 25, 2010 Share Posted September 25, 2010 Preferred the version with the PLA logo, honestly. NCFA-FCS/CBB: Minnesota A&M | RANZBA (OOTP): Auckland Warriors | USA: Front Range United | IFA: Toverit Helsinki | FOBL: Kentucky Juggernaut Minnesota A&M 2012 National Champions 2013 National Finalist, 2014 National Semi-finals 2012, 2013, 2014 Big 4 Conference Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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