BrianVlietDesign Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 Hey guys, I've been granted a franchise in the newly formed sim baseball league here on the boards and am making my own logos with Paint and Inkscape. I have an idea right now for a cap logo and I would like to know if anyone has any comments or suggestions on what else I can do with it. NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brave-Bird 08 Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 for starters, the proportions are off. I see how you tried to connect the leaf and make it flush with the "M"...but it's just wayyy too small, or the M is wayy too big, either way you take it.Also, some strokes are really really thin. really thin strokes are bad. nice, wide outlines are a major key in making a good design. If it were me I would make the leaf proportionately similar in size to the M, but keep it pretty much where it is. then, make the outlines on both elements a lot thicker. I also might try to stylize the M a little bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted November 9, 2010 Author Share Posted November 9, 2010 for starters, the proportions are off. I see how you tried to connect the leaf and make it flush with the "M"...but it's just wayyy too small, or the M is wayy too big, either way you take it.Also, some strokes are really really thin. really thin strokes are bad. nice, wide outlines are a major key in making a good design. If it were me I would make the leaf proportionately similar in size to the M, but keep it pretty much where it is. then, make the outlines on both elements a lot thicker. I also might try to stylize the M a little bit more.Ok, just so I get this straight:-Make the leaf the same size as the M.-Make line strokes more thick.-Stylize M more.One question, what's your suggestion as to more stylization of the M? NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exaccardi Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 why do the different parts of the M lay on top of each other? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted November 9, 2010 Author Share Posted November 9, 2010 why do the different parts of the M lay on top of each other?Well, this was not the final product. More of a rough draft as to what I was going for. I know the lines in between don't match, I just added it in there for me to follow up on later. If that makes sense? NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianVlietDesign Posted November 9, 2010 Author Share Posted November 9, 2010 Here is a tad of an update to the rough draft: NYCFC - MLS CUP CHAMPIONS - 2021 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yuanyiw Posted November 9, 2010 Share Posted November 9, 2010 spam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
exaccardi Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Much much much much much better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Even thicker outlines.Nice update though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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