Trevis Meseroll Posted January 13, 2011 Share Posted January 13, 2011 This is my first real attempt at a concept... A guy i know is head man for a Semi Pro football team and asked me to create a brand and uniform concept for there team this year (i know the uni is Cal Bears, but he asked for that)... Feedback or ideas would be cool thanks in advance...Trevis Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neo_prankster Posted January 13, 2011 Share Posted January 13, 2011 The logo doesn't seem very aggressive. The Fictional Story of Austus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevis Meseroll Posted January 13, 2011 Author Share Posted January 13, 2011 The logo doesn't seem very aggressive.Yea, but the "aggressive" was more along the wordmark and the numbers, i like that font... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted January 13, 2011 Share Posted January 13, 2011 I'm not feeling this at all. There's no emphasis on the nickname at all...it's an afterthought typed into the space above Atlanta.I think it needs a lot of work.And don't get me started on the overused font "demonized" Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trevis Meseroll Posted January 13, 2011 Author Share Posted January 13, 2011 Got ya, just my first crack at a concept and i'm still tweaking some things and just wanted to test the waters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Puck Posted January 18, 2011 Share Posted January 18, 2011 This is my first real attempt at a concept... A guy i know is head man for a Semi Pro football team and asked me to create a brand and uniform concept for there team this year (i know the uni is Cal Bears, but he asked for that)... Feedback or ideas would be cool thanks in advance...TrevisLogo is confusing for the fact that Atlanta isn't Georgia and all of Georgia isn't Atlanta. Also, you probably could have done a better job staggering the letters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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