joshhockey Posted November 6, 2012 Share Posted November 6, 2012 Lately I haven't really been doing much of anything for real teams but instead getting my practice by creating random identities and trying to challenge myself to make logos in styles that I normally wouldn't. This has lead me to work on some 'fantasy' concepts. Anyways, I'd love some C&C because what I'm looking for with these concepts is just to become a better designer. Here is the first concept, the Jefferson City Eagles.Primary:Secondary:Home:Road:Alternate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted November 6, 2012 Share Posted November 6, 2012 Everything looks sharp. Nice choice of colors. But, the feather on the alt logo looks a little wonky, but other than that, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted November 6, 2012 Author Share Posted November 6, 2012 Yeah I see that now too, I had to decide whether to put the feather behind the C or in front and it looked best behind but it does become a little distorted looking due the the shape of the C. I'm especially proud of the eagle logo and just wanted to see if there was anything I could do to improve it as I'm trying to get away from inanimate object logos and force myself to create more animal, human and anatomical logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackBolt3 Posted November 6, 2012 Share Posted November 6, 2012 Yeah I see that now too, I had to decide whether to put the feather behind the C or in front and it looked best behind but it does become a little distorted looking due the the shape of the C. I'm especially proud of the eagle logo and just wanted to see if there was anything I could do to improve it as I'm trying to get away from inanimate object logos and force myself to create more animal, human and anatomical logos.Actually, I was talking about the shape of the feather. Maybe end it to a point. The eagle is the best thing about the set. The only thing I can think of is make it angrier by squinting the eye and opening the beak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted November 7, 2012 Author Share Posted November 7, 2012 Here is the second concept I've been working on. The team is called the Tucson Outlaws. The concept really started as the native looking pattern and went from there. I'm pretty proud of the jersey design as I think it is really original. C&C would be greatly appreciated.Primary:Secondary:Home:Away:Alternate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted November 7, 2012 Share Posted November 7, 2012 i think the alt jersey would benefit from some shoulder numbers #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Philsphan Posted November 7, 2012 Share Posted November 7, 2012 Wow! Really cool! The Coyotes should really look at this to see how hockey should look in the desert. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted November 15, 2012 Author Share Posted November 15, 2012 Bumping this for some more C&C. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDixonDesign Posted November 15, 2012 Share Posted November 15, 2012 Great job! Nice to see someone portray a "western" theme into Hockey. Something that's not done very often. The color scheme, and use of the rainbow on the Outlaws really makes the set pop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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