patsox Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 I'll start with the crest. Uniforms to follow. I know this is a work in progress so keep the C+C coming please and thank you.-Brianaka the Patsox*BTW Rather than explain this, feel free to ask all the questions your little hearts feel necessary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 It's illegible. The LA gets lost.Why is the L outlined but not the A?Yellow, teal, purple, black, 2 shades of silver and white. Too. Many. Colors.Either the sash isn't centered, or the ball isn't. The colored hexagon panels don't even line up correctly.Why is Est 1995 larger than Galaxy?Did you give up on your other concepts to throw this one together?To quote your member title, damn indeed. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted May 14, 2007 Author Share Posted May 14, 2007 Alright I'll fix it. Thanks, that was what I wanted.And, no...1) I didn't "throw" this together. 2) I will continue to work on the others. I'm just taking a break to clear my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nyjet88 Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 That font reminds me of "litte nemo: the dream master" for nintendo 8-bit. Maybe the whole logo, I don't know. I know it's no the same font, but that's what I think of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted May 14, 2007 Author Share Posted May 14, 2007 Is this better, worse, the no difference at all?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nyjet88 Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 Is this better, worse, the no difference at all??You can make out LA now. But now, it just looks like a circle. I don't see soccer in that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kewp80 Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 The last thing the MLS needs is teams copying badges from European teams. (AC Milan) Cardinals -- Rams -- Blues -- Tigers -- Liverpool Check out my music! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 I think I know what you're going for, but that just looks... ODD. Looks like a rip of the Coyote's moon, with a random star in there for show. The sash is now completely off kilter and off center. The "EST 1995" is still too twisted and barely ledgible. A slight improvement yes, but still not that great.Keep trying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nyjet88 Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 Another thing. you have A underlined on the left and XY underlined on the right. It looks off.Keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
patsox Posted May 24, 2007 Author Share Posted May 24, 2007 And now the kits:Primary:Change: Still working on the logo though. A work in process as of now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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