wences Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 Hello again! Here we go! New proposal for the Miami MLS club. Miami United as well, because David Beckham's connection, and with a Paris Saint-Germain identity base because the new owner, Qatar Sports Investiment. What do you think? Many thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 Really like the jersey but the building in the middle has to be simplified and stylized. PSG's Eiffel Tower isn't a realistic sketch like yours is so just try to make the building simpler and maybe have the grey behind it follow the outline of the building so it doesn't look like you stole it right off of PSG's. And a little nitpick is that the blue seems a little too bright aaaannnd I don't see the need for the palm tree and flamingo imo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted March 6, 2016 Share Posted March 6, 2016 I'd take the building out and create a M in the middle instead of the swoop which is meant to mimic the Eiffel Tower. The flamingo and palm tree are useless here. Enlarge them or remove them. I'd keep the palm tree and toss the flamingo though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 Thank you for your opinions! I will try to improve my design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 But, are you agree with the PSG identity for Miami MLS team? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 5 hours ago, MJWalker45 said: I'd take the building out and create a M in the middle instead of the swoop which is meant to mimic the Eiffel Tower. The flamingo and palm tree are useless here. Enlarge them or remove them. I'd keep the palm tree and toss the flamingo though. I don't like the idea of the M, but thank you for your opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 6, 2016 Author Share Posted March 6, 2016 8 hours ago, XenonDesigns said: Really like the jersey but the building in the middle has to be simplified and stylized. PSG's Eiffel Tower isn't a realistic sketch like yours is so just try to make the building simpler and maybe have the grey behind it follow the outline of the building so it doesn't look like you stole it right off of PSG's. And a little nitpick is that the blue seems a little too bright aaaannnd I don't see the need for the palm tree and flamingo imo The owners of PSG are the new Miami MLS club owners that's why I tried to keep the PSG crest as close as I can. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 2 hours ago, wences said: The owners of PSG are the new Miami MLS club owners that's why I tried to keep the PSG crest as close as I can. Yes but I don't think that MLS would like that idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 7, 2016 Author Share Posted March 7, 2016 17 minutes ago, XenonDesigns said: Yes but I don't think that MLS would like that idea. Well, New York City FC is property 80 percent of City Group (Abu Dhabi Manchester City owners) and 20 percent New York Yankees Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 3 minutes ago, wences said: Well, New York City FC is property 80 percent of City Group (Abu Dhabi Manchester City owners) and 20 percent New York Yankees But the logo doesn't look like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 7, 2016 Author Share Posted March 7, 2016 1 minute ago, XenonDesigns said: But the logo doesn't look like this That's not the real Man City logo. After this summer you will see this: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 1 minute ago, wences said: That's not the real Man City logo. After this summer you will see this: Still doesn't look like NYCFC. If it was that rounded with a MCFC then I'd see your point. But anyways, you should focus on updating your current one. It's a great start but needs more work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 7, 2016 Author Share Posted March 7, 2016 1 minute ago, XenonDesigns said: Still doesn't look like NYCFC. If it was that rounded with a MCFC then I'd see your point. But anyways, you should focus on updating your current one. It's a great start but needs more work. All the City Group clubs change their identity to a sky blue colour and roundel crest: Melbourne City is the other one. Very controversial in Melbourne, they wore red and white stripes under the name of Melbourne Heart. The fans don't like the new identity, but City Group owners don't care about it. Sky blue is the Sydney sports teams colour. Crazy thing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XenonDesigns Posted March 7, 2016 Share Posted March 7, 2016 11 minutes ago, wences said: All the City Group clubs change their identity to a sky blue colour and roundel crest: Melbourne City is the other one. Very controversial in Melbourne, they wore red and white stripes under the name of Melbourne Heart. The fans don't like the new identity, but City Group owners don't care about it. Sky blue is the Sydney sports teams colour. Crazy thing! I've seen Melbourne City before but I never noticed that the ship in the bottom right is EXACT same ship as MCFC. But just get rid of the Eiffel Tower outline thingy if you make an update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wences Posted March 7, 2016 Author Share Posted March 7, 2016 1 minute ago, XenonDesigns said: I've seen Melbourne City before but I never noticed that the ship in the bottom right is EXACT same ship as MCFC. But just get rid of the Eiffel Tower outline thingy if you make an update. Ok, I respect your opinion, but you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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