Yankj1 Posted August 15, 2004 Share Posted August 15, 2004 Home JerseyRoad Jersey My MSN jersey group Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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diabeticbrad Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 It's just a little bit too bland for my liking. The name has potential, but I'm not a huge fan of the STL on a basketball jersey. The jerseys need more color in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gorams1 Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 I agree. It's a tad plain. I'd add silver highlights to it, but I really like the arch on the shorts, really creative. And I'd also ditch the STL, and go with EXPLORERS on the home, and ST.LOUIS for the road. Hope that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
winters in buffalo Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 I did a concept a few months ago for a hockey team with the same name. If you want, I can send you the logo to use... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted August 16, 2004 Share Posted August 16, 2004 It's a start, but there's so much more that could be done do it.For starters, don't just rip off the "STL" from the Cardinals. Unless it's begin done as a tribute to a past athletic team, or an official emblem of the city (like NYC and the NY logo used by the Yankees and Knicks for a time), come up with a different version of it. You don't even need it on the jerseys, really. Just have them both say "Explorers", or put "St. Louis" on the roads.The name with the underline looks like an afterthought. There are more athletic looking fonts out there, try to use one of them.Is the arch with red underneath it the logo? I don't understand its placement in between the jersey and the shorts, when it's not repeated anywhere else. Maybe it would tie in better if the arched area on the shorts was in red as well, and have the numbers in white.The same can be said for the road jerseys. Play around with colorizing the different areas of the uniform. Use white numbers/letters on the road, or put a white outline around the blue text.Here's a concept I did recently for a fantasy basketball team from St. Louis. This might give you an idea of how to colorize some of the arched areas. I'm not saying to rip it off entirely, but there's an infinite amount of possibilites with an arch, so find inspiration where you can.Keep at it. Good luck. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankj1 Posted August 16, 2004 Author Share Posted August 16, 2004 Thanks i'll work on them My MSN jersey group Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 It's just a little bit too bland for my liking. The name has potential, but I'm not a huge fan of the STL on a basketball jerseyDon't take anything personal, seems everyone made some good suggestions.I love the name! Good concept, the Red unis would look nice with the Silver that was suggested. I agree, need a "new" STL, you can create something new and unique - go for it, let your imagination fly. Keep up the good work! Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted August 17, 2004 Share Posted August 17, 2004 i like that archers concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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