Jeffery Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 Working on making a script for a Phoenix Baseball team. I've never worked on a script before, so I am hoping for some feedback. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BurdBranding Posted February 23, 2020 Share Posted February 23, 2020 Looks like a classic, old school script that would be great for baseball. Any more details about the team that could maybe influence the script to make it more unique to the team? Maybe even adding something to the whole logo to signify “baseball”. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted February 24, 2020 Share Posted February 24, 2020 It's kind of picky and so small. But is one of that things I saw and I wish I haven't, because now I can't "un-see". I circled these two places that I think attention is required. In the P, I'd have the base of the glyph following the swash. It's opening a little in the end of the base. And the junction between the X and the swash is strange. Looks like an elbow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffery Posted February 24, 2020 Author Share Posted February 24, 2020 Thanks for the feedback! I've changed the concept from a literal baseball team to a baseball-inspired logo for my university. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sportsfan7 Posted February 26, 2020 Share Posted February 26, 2020 Adding a laces pattern to the circle (moon?) might help make it seem more like a baseball team. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted February 26, 2020 Share Posted February 26, 2020 I would rotate the entire script (just the letters) about 10-15 degrees clockwise so it doesn't feel like it's falling off the side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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