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Fairmont State Falcons Concept


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Nicely done.

A few things...

...the bird looks sad. Perhaps make the upper brow line more U-shaped.

...the bird's beak needs adjusting. The lower part of the beak looks like it forms the hook, when in reality, it is mainly the upper part of the beak that forms the hook. The lower part stop comes to a point before it hooks down.

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To me, the primary looks too long. I would suggest trying to get the falcon on the same line as "Fairmont", or re-working the falcon and extending it from "Fairmont state". The pieces seem well done, they just need put together differently. :wink2:

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i know people have told you this before Ian, but slow down. Work some, take a step back then come down to it later. keep doing it until you are completely satisfied, then get some critique from a few of us by aim or whatever, make revisions and then show it when its 100% or close. right now a lot of your work looks 75% done because you seem to come up with one every couple of days. you do great work, but you can do a hell of a lot better by slowing down some.

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