MonoMan Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 This is my first full package for a team. For some reason the word mark just would not work for me today. It only gets better, right? I suffer from a very sexy learning disability..... sexlexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 Wow. That's really awesome. The uniforms are good, if really simple.You think you could give my SFL team a shot? Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonoMan Posted May 27, 2005 Author Share Posted May 27, 2005 I will see what I can do, give me a few days to throw something together. I suffer from a very sexy learning disability..... sexlexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 Sweet. Me likey. Maybe try the medium red/orange on the helmet though. Copper head on a copper helmet is tough to discern....unless you have a pretty good outline.Otherwise, these are grrrrrrrrrrreat.750 points 5-time Defending NL East Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randyc Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 awesome, just awesome, thanks a ton monoman! i thought you said you werent good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rbripley Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 Wow! I really like the simple and clean design you've come up with here. Also diggin the logo a lot - fierce! I agree with the previous poster about the difficulty in seeing the copper head on the copper helmet. Also would be interested to see the home uniform with the same red pants with a copper shirt keeping the white sleeves? Dunno, might be cool.Again, great work and thanks for sharing. "Conduct may be founded on the hard rock or the wet marshes." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BB61 Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 I will see what I can do, give me a few days to throw something together. Awesome dude, no hurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 I would get rid of one of the reds, just have the mouth black with the tongue red. that will make some difference and simplify the colors a bit. otherwise, this is very good work. the angularity of it makes it look agressive. I'd beef up the outside black line of the mouth as well, just to make it match the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MonoMan Posted May 27, 2005 Author Share Posted May 27, 2005 Joshua, I did as you suggested and I think it looks much better, thanks for the advice. I will not keep posting updates, just this one. I realy like the tongue now, still need a bit of clean up. Thanks again. I suffer from a very sexy learning disability..... sexlexia. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EJ_Barlik Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 Joshua, I did as you suggested and I think it looks much better, thanks for the advice. I will not keep posting updates, just this one. I realy like the tongue now, still need a bit of clean up. Thanks again. Sweet.10,000 points. 5-time Defending NL East Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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