TurnTwo Posted October 16, 2005 Share Posted October 16, 2005 UPDATE: 2/12/06 "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 16, 2005 Share Posted October 16, 2005 It's simple, and I'm not feeling the font you chose. But this has potential - maybe darken your shadows and highlights to make them more prominent - it could use some more depth to it. nice start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted October 17, 2005 Author Share Posted October 17, 2005 I was thinking about the shadows and highlights. This is really my first concept in which I've incorporated them. I'll get to work on it using your suggestions and repost soon. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 if it's "riot" as in a prison riot, consider adding some barbed wire to the fences, and maybe some spotlights. it will add some more depth and dimension. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROCHitman Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 Spotlights would really spice it up!Maybe a blazing fire or jail cell bars somewhere in the wordmark would work as well. Owner of Kalamazoo Tech Kobras (Nat'l College Fant. Assc. Basketball, Football, and Hockey) 2006-07 NCFAB National Champions2006 NCFAF Midwest Conf. ChampionsRochester Patriots (Major League Hockey - AHL Fantasy League) 2005-06 Neilson Cup ChampsDetroit Black Panthers (Xtreme Hockey League) 2005-06 Yzerman Conference ChampsSheldon Motorsports (TRAC) - #20 Guinness Chevy & #21 UPS Chevy #44 Syracuse University ChevyCommissioner ofMLH (Major League Hockey, an AHL Fantasy League)TRAC (Team Racing Auto Circuit, NASCAR) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sean69 Posted October 17, 2005 Share Posted October 17, 2005 Need, fire, looting, couple of prison guards getting bitch slapped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted October 18, 2005 Author Share Posted October 18, 2005 Yeah, well I'm from Attica (it's more than just a prison, there's a real town ) and I used the silohuette of the actual prison. I'll try and make it more "rioty". "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROCHitman Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 there's a real townYou mean village, right? I've seen Attica. There's not much there.Town Population (2000) = 6,028 Owner of Kalamazoo Tech Kobras (Nat'l College Fant. Assc. Basketball, Football, and Hockey) 2006-07 NCFAB National Champions2006 NCFAF Midwest Conf. ChampionsRochester Patriots (Major League Hockey - AHL Fantasy League) 2005-06 Neilson Cup ChampsDetroit Black Panthers (Xtreme Hockey League) 2005-06 Yzerman Conference ChampsSheldon Motorsports (TRAC) - #20 Guinness Chevy & #21 UPS Chevy #44 Syracuse University ChevyCommissioner ofMLH (Major League Hockey, an AHL Fantasy League)TRAC (Team Racing Auto Circuit, NASCAR) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted October 18, 2005 Author Share Posted October 18, 2005 there's a real townYou mean village, right? I've seen Attica. There's not much there.Town Population (2000) = 6,028 The village is the more populated area, it's techinically a town due to land mass it's considered a town I believe. Maybe I'm wrong...I'm just going by the signs coming into town...."Welcome to the Town of Attica" then in about 8 more miles "Welcome to the Village of Attica". Yes, you're correct there is not much here either . "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ltravisjr Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 Regarding the font, I can envision you using one similar to Loyola Marymount's, with the pointed ends and beveled look. Something like that could compliment this nicely.LT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigga Posted October 18, 2005 Share Posted October 18, 2005 This one has great potential! In all seriousness, threads like this are what makes these boards so great. A good idea plus clear detailed critiques and suggestions to make it even better. Keep it up guys! On January 16, 2013 at 3:49 PM, NJTank said: Btw this is old hat for Notre Dame. Knits Rockne made up George Tip's death bed speech. Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ROCHitman Posted October 24, 2005 Share Posted October 24, 2005 Do you have an updated version to show us? Owner of Kalamazoo Tech Kobras (Nat'l College Fant. Assc. Basketball, Football, and Hockey) 2006-07 NCFAB National Champions2006 NCFAF Midwest Conf. ChampionsRochester Patriots (Major League Hockey - AHL Fantasy League) 2005-06 Neilson Cup ChampsDetroit Black Panthers (Xtreme Hockey League) 2005-06 Yzerman Conference ChampsSheldon Motorsports (TRAC) - #20 Guinness Chevy & #21 UPS Chevy #44 Syracuse University ChevyCommissioner ofMLH (Major League Hockey, an AHL Fantasy League)TRAC (Team Racing Auto Circuit, NASCAR) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted February 11, 2006 Author Share Posted February 11, 2006 Brought this one out from the depths....just started from scratch. It's still a work in progress and I'd love suggestions. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted February 11, 2006 Author Share Posted February 11, 2006 I made these for a secondary logo. I'm not sure which one I like best. What do you guys think? "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted February 12, 2006 Author Share Posted February 12, 2006 No feedback? I guess I've created the PERFECT logo. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eRay Posted February 12, 2006 Share Posted February 12, 2006 ok, the second installment... the wordmark needs to be more readable, the r could be a b right now, but other thsn thst all you need is a little more detail. looks good. no more copperplate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted February 12, 2006 Author Share Posted February 12, 2006 Yeah, I never realized how much copperplate can be overused. Thanks for the C&C. I'll work on the R. "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TurnTwo Posted February 12, 2006 Author Share Posted February 12, 2006 "I must be butter, because I'm on a roll."Turn Two Design // Facebook Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlyinV Posted February 12, 2006 Share Posted February 12, 2006 Very Nice Work,Primary Logo rock's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REDSOXFAN Posted February 13, 2006 Share Posted February 13, 2006 Hey TurnTwo419,Nice Logo....I like it! Was just messing around and here's a photoshop version of "Attica Riot"...See ya in school tomorrow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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