Brendan Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 This is done in MS paint and is my first ever logo. I know its real bad but thats why i posted it so it can get better. The logo is for a NAHL application. I hope you guys can give me some good C&C and hopefully i can make this logo look decent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PaperAirplane31 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Make the mountains more rocky, the water reflective, and the snow caps more uneven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendan Posted August 14, 2006 Author Share Posted August 14, 2006 Make the mountains more rocky, the water reflective, and the snow caps more uneven. thanks thats what i was thinking i wasn't sure how to do that though. Any help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Texasrangers13 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 For the snowcaps just use jagged edges, and lines. Round the logo out, either flatten the bottom or put in a circle. credit: Logodawg86 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gueman Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Move the lettering to the bottom, clean up the lettering and change the font. I agree that the water and mountains need to be jazzed up a bit. Look at how the Rockies and Jazz did thier mountain. Also I would only use one mountain and either put trees or the skyline of Seattle as the break between the Mountain and the water. The colors seem to be muted, make one or all brighter. Giving money and power to government is like giving whiskey and car keys to teenage boys. P. J. O'Rourke Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fonz Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Spice it up a little. Looks very boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 way too boring. i really like the already existant seattle sounders. great name and logo to go with it. think about that logo, and get creative with yours. dont be afraid to spend a good amount of time on it either. this looks like a 5 mintue job here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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