Tennessee Titans concept

[kewp80]

Tried something new with the helmet, the numbers are a little wierd, but they shouldn't get in your way of understading the overall concept. Tell me what you all think.

[Eggman183]

Looking pretty good. Just a few things:

-Get rid of the red in the numbers, and tone down the blue shading on them. Even with the red, it's a little too much.

-Try to get the side stripe to go a little farther down the pants before pointing.

-This isn't so much a complaint as simply personal preference, but I don't like the sword logo pointed forwards, since that makes it no longer a T, and the idea of using that logo in the first place lowers the value of the main logo. I do like the helmet sword (upright) for the powder alternates, though.

Oh, and this is just about presentation, but try to fix the shoulder logos from coming off the jersey.

Still, lots of promise, and will look great after a few revisions.

[IceCap]

I would return the swoard logo to its original position, otherwise you lose the logo's double meaning.

[nwtrailtrekker]

agreed. need to keep the "T" going on

[statebully]

not too excited about the helmet, but the jerseys have potential. i would remove the double color outline from around the numerals...just stick to one thick color. other than that, not too bad at all!