joshhockey Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 This is my first logo ever and I know its really bad but its my first so I just want you guys to help me out and tell me how I can get better. So here you go. C&C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wildwing64 Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Not too bad for your first attempt, but the edges just need to be smoother, and they need outlines. PotD: 24/08/2017 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Yeah, its not bad at all. Just smooth it out and use less bright colors. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted December 24, 2008 Author Share Posted December 24, 2008 Alright thanks but its hard to smooth them out on paint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Alright thanks but its hard to smooth them out on paint.WHOA! You used Paint to make this? I didn't even know it was possible to make logos this good in Paint. 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 I agree with wildwing64, an outline would help or at least thicken the thin red line you currently have. also I dont know if that one color is brown or dark burnt red on his lower face area, but that is the only place I see that color so you should make it black or get rid of it. maybe try slanting the the top of the eye down and to the right to make him more fierce. and smoothen out the bumps on the back of his head to be on smooth consistent line. Despite all my comments I think you did a good job for your first one and with using paint, not bad. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted December 24, 2008 Author Share Posted December 24, 2008 Yeah I did it on Paint.NET then used vector magic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TC Posted December 24, 2008 Share Posted December 24, 2008 Yeah I did it on Paint.NET then used vector magic.Oh, vector magic. I get it now. Still pretty good for paint 1/27/09- It was me, and I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
josh_cat_eyes Posted December 25, 2008 Share Posted December 25, 2008 Try drawing what you want first. Scan it, then trace it on paint. That way you have at least a little bit of an idea how it is going to look lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joshhockey Posted December 25, 2008 Author Share Posted December 25, 2008 alright thanks for the tip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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