BBTV Posted February 23, 2010 Share Posted February 23, 2010 That's not good at all, lol.For one thing, you have a white side panel butting up against a fat purple pants stripe. That should never happen.Second, it's clear that you're trying to do Viking horns on the jersey, but it just ain't workin'. For one thing, it's too gimmicky. For another, the Viking horns are never purple, only white. For yet another, for the horn effect to really work, there can't be any kind of extension onto the back. Even if there was, the back stripe looks awkwardly cut off at the horizontal seam.Besides all that, you have a pretty modern jersey template (with the horn and back thingy) and very traditional numbers and pants. It looks like you just reached into a bag and grabbed random elements and put them on a uniform. You're better than this.I'm not trying to be harsh, just giving you legit c/c. "The views expressed here are mine and do not reflect the official opinion of my employer or the organization through which the Internet was accessed." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CJworks Posted February 23, 2010 Share Posted February 23, 2010 Yea, you definately had it down with the previous concept. Like BBTV touched on, the horns don't necessarily fit into that exact template, and the numbers to kinda clash with the different elements you have going on here. Dribbble | Twitter | Facebook | Portfolio Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
skier14 Posted February 23, 2010 Author Share Posted February 23, 2010 Yeah, thats what I thought. I thought I would just throw something out there. I don't even think I liked it. HAHA. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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