DeadFish Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 This was an logo I thought I'd try my hand at after noting that one of the local baseball clubs here are simply using the Pittsburgh Pirates logo. The clubs colour scheme is also yellow and black, so I have stuck with that.Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Number 8 Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 Try to center it a bit more My concept blog http://hockeyconcepts.blogspot.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fumbler Posted May 30, 2010 Share Posted May 30, 2010 Not too bad deadfishDon't mind the colours, i agree Number 8 centre and tilt a little, look more menacing if it was slightly tilted forward (downward).Make the line on the check a tad bit thiner.Really nice though doesn't look whimpy, got that bad pirate look. RICHMOND TIGERS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadFish Posted June 4, 2010 Author Share Posted June 4, 2010 Made some minor tweaks - rotated, cheek line thinner, smoothed some other bitsAny other suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadFish Posted June 9, 2010 Author Share Posted June 9, 2010 Working on a wordmark to go with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WNDUP FX Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 It still looks very amateur and resembles clip art more than I'm sure you meant it to. I think that has a lot to do with the thickness of the lines inside of the face. I'm not really sure you're going to be able to go further with this design, since it really isn't a professional looking graphic. It might be suitable for a minor league team, but definitely doesn't say "Major Leagues" to me.Edit: I reread and noticed it was for a Minor League team, so my mistake. I should probably step away from the computer once in a while, because my eyes must've skipped that line. Behance | @scotmccormack Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rcb05 Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 I'd shorten the goatee, maybe change the color of the ball/cross bats logo to white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justie Posted June 9, 2010 Share Posted June 9, 2010 It's good for a minor league logo Active TeamsWinnipeg Blue Bombers (1-2, T-1st, East Div.)Toronto Blue Jays (45-49, 5th in AL East Div. 8.5 GB of wildcard spot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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