udubs03 Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 I just got NCAA 11 and naturally wanted to try out Teambuilder. I cranked this out last night and began my dynasty as the Wisconsin State Muskies. Right now, all I have is the fish logo, but I'm working on some other bits and pieces as well. I'm pretty happy with how the fish came out, but I definitely want to push it a little further. Suggestions?C&C Please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bohob Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 The fins look a little disjointed, and there's something about the head that needs work. I can't quite pinpoint it. It's a good start and I like the color combo. NHL 2016 by Bowen Hobbs * BOHOB's MLB Redesign Project * MiLB Re-Brands * NCAA Football Concepts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Its really cool, I love the style of it. Not much to say, I agree with Bohob I think the fins are really the only thing off about it. Good start though, I wish I could provide a bit more help dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
udubs03 Posted July 30, 2010 Author Share Posted July 30, 2010 The fins are definitely something I'll need to address.Bohob, i think the perspective of the head is off. The lower jaw is almost a 3/4 view, while the top jaw is more of a profile.Thanks for the comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclone20 Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 Maybe just get rid of the black line where the red and green would connect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cola Posted July 30, 2010 Share Posted July 30, 2010 maybe some white highlights in the mouth/teeth? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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