Spammy Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 Hey everyone! I have another concept, but I don't believe its up to par with my others... I would love some C+C on this as I think I need some help.Here was the original sketch of it:And my try at it in Inkscape:I will ad colours later, just working on the rendering of it first... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Fixer Posted March 15, 2011 Share Posted March 15, 2011 I like it. There are a lot of bandit logos that are similar though. just how bandit logos go. I would stretch it a bit (redraw it though) to convey some motion and thicken that circle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted March 15, 2011 Author Share Posted March 15, 2011 I like it. There are a lot of bandit logos that are similar though. just how bandit logos go. I would stretch it a bit (redraw it though) to convey some motion and thicken that circleYeah, I drew it and I kept thinking of other logos. The first one I saw was the Patriots somehow. I think cause of the hat... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted March 18, 2011 Author Share Posted March 18, 2011 Bump for somee more c+c? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 the cowboy hat needs some work. the top of it should be slightly taller or at least have the black outline form a shadow line on the far end of the hat. The 2 jagged edges on the hankerchief/bandana dont make sense unless your trying to make it look tattered and ripped. and the perfect circle where the bandana is tied shouldnt be so perfect. the whole logo has this free flowing feel to it and then you have this perfect circle which doesnt match the feel of the rest of it. try make it look more tied. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaha32 Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 and one more thing. try giving the eye a black pupil. DesignsByHahn.com Behance Dribbble Instragram Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buster Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 Reminds me of the SKOAL Bandit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted March 18, 2011 Share Posted March 18, 2011 It's a bit hard to recognize in general. The hat doesn't really look like a hat, and the bandanna is jagged, which made me question "why?" Also, the back of the bandanna where it is tied together isn't really natural looking. It doesn't look tied together at all.Overall, there are so many logos that are similar to this (looking at "bandits" and "outlaws" logos) that it's difficult to go this direction and have it really stand out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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