justie Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Well the logo was released yesterday so I whiped up a concept on paint on what they should useA home could come in a couple of daysC&C please Active TeamsWinnipeg Blue Bombers (1-2, T-1st, East Div.)Toronto Blue Jays (45-49, 5th in AL East Div. 8.5 GB of wildcard spot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Well, it's quite sloppy to say the least. That crest is massive for starters. Additionally, the yoke is way too wide and sloppily outlined, the color you used for the name doesn't match the shade of navy in the rest of the concept, and the number is too far down on the back. The piping is superfluous and is oddly jagged on one side while curved on the other. You also forgot to color in the back collar. There's a lot of work needed on this - slow down, take your time, and focus on the details. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Everything Lights Out said. Slow down. This is not good work in the slightest, and your proportions/attention to detail are very off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northender Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 Like that you brought back the red pants. Would be cool to see the white ring at the bottom of the leg again...little nod to the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
untvar Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 No thanx. It's too close to the 1990 uni. And it has random/unnecessary piping. IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justie Posted July 24, 2011 Author Share Posted July 24, 2011 I think I got everything Lights Out said so here is concept 2: Active TeamsWinnipeg Blue Bombers (1-2, T-1st, East Div.)Toronto Blue Jays (45-49, 5th in AL East Div. 8.5 GB of wildcard spot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lights Out Posted July 24, 2011 Share Posted July 24, 2011 It's better, but the yoke is still really wide for some reason. Also, you should probably ditch the piping - it still doesn't look good. POTD: 2/4/12 3/4/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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