JSauer21 Posted September 25, 2011 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Spartans is a very popular mascot, so I thought that I would make a logo for it. Tell me what you think. My Website/Portfolio: jsa-designs.devianart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnrafael Posted September 25, 2011 Share Posted September 25, 2011 Liked. But if you created the shield and the swords perfectly, Why a Damaged helmet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSauer21 Posted September 25, 2011 Author Share Posted September 25, 2011 Liked. But if you created the shield and the swords perfectly, Why a Damaged helmet?I thought that it would look cool. Here's what it looks like with an undamaged helmet. My Website/Portfolio: jsa-designs.devianart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varsity Blue Posted September 26, 2011 Share Posted September 26, 2011 The swords are from the wrong area, they look like pirate cutlasses. Make them more Spartan like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
walkerws Posted September 26, 2011 Share Posted September 26, 2011 Theyre from the movie I think. Not necessarily historically accurate but look at hte hilts. I don't think the pirate ones have those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSauer21 Posted September 28, 2011 Author Share Posted September 28, 2011 Theyre from the movie I think. Not necessarily historically accurate but look at hte hilts. I don't think the pirate ones have those.Yeah they're supposed to be like the ones from the movie. They do kind of look like pirate swords in a way though. My Website/Portfolio: jsa-designs.devianart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
9erssteve Posted September 28, 2011 Share Posted September 28, 2011 Composition wise it's not a bad start, and as an illustration it's pretty good, but technically it's not a sports logo that could be used by the NFL or another pro sport or a college team as it uses to many colours and contains textures etc, and there isn't really an identifiable colour scheme that you could use across the rest of a uni or other merchandise.To make this really successful as a sports logo you'll need to decide on a colour scheme first. Then find a way to simplify down the composition you have so you can recreate the light and shade using only the colours you've chosen, 3 should be enough, and avoid gradients at all costs. Remember this logo would have to be stitched onto caps shirts etc and you cant produce gradients with stitching.Layout wise it's a good start, but now you need to create a logo from what you've got. Cant wait to see this progress.9erssteve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSauer21 Posted September 29, 2011 Author Share Posted September 29, 2011 More like a sports logo? My Website/Portfolio: jsa-designs.devianart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryptik Posted September 29, 2011 Share Posted September 29, 2011 I was gonna make the same suggestions about smoothing out the colors and lines to make it more viable as a sports logo, but I got beat to it.As for the second version...the red feels way too bright, and I think the swords really clash with the rest of the logo. In general, I think more could be done if the swords were scrapped altogether and the shield made a little more defining. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSauer21 Posted October 1, 2011 Author Share Posted October 1, 2011 I scratched the swords, and chose a color scheme that doesn't hurt your eyes. I think that it's much better, what do you guys think? My Website/Portfolio: jsa-designs.devianart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JSauer21 Posted October 2, 2011 Author Share Posted October 2, 2011 A basic primary uniform that I made. My Website/Portfolio: jsa-designs.devianart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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