Greg_Fryman Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 A fictional concept I have been working on for a game I play.... Any advice on how I can improve would be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epiphanic Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 The beak seems too big and misshaped. It doesn't look like an eagle. I dig the stylized C, but inverting the second C for the cap/secondary just muddles it up. It looks like there's supposed to be something else there (like an H or whatever in the negative space), but there isn't anything that makes sense. A single C would probably be sufficient. "In the arena of logic, I fight unarmed."I tweet & tumble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greg_Fryman Posted August 17, 2012 Author Share Posted August 17, 2012 Changed the beak up..Two cap logo variations.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hugevolsfan Posted August 17, 2012 Share Posted August 17, 2012 The eagle needs an eye.I just like the plain c but I would thicken the stroke on it & your workmark My Fictional Football League Version 3 My Fictional Football Leagues WebsiteMy Church Website Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spearhead Posted August 18, 2012 Share Posted August 18, 2012 The eagle looks more like a raven. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greg_Fryman Posted August 18, 2012 Author Share Posted August 18, 2012 Alright so I took the advice I changed the beak add a thicker stroke to the cap logo. A couple things that I didn't change word a thicker stroke on the word mark and I understand that it looks a little like a different bird but I wanted the kind of abstract feeling to it and thats why I didn't add the eyes. Thanks everyone for you input I like where it is at now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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