alexo Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 This is one of my first concept, the Portland Red Foxes. I want to know want do you think of it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 There are a number of issues here with regard to colour, placement, and form. First off, it looks like he's eating his tail. Second, the white and black look like it's been randomly applied to the face--I get no sense of what direction the light is coming from or what other purpose those colours serve. Moreover, the black and white emphasis the red middle of the face and the eyes, which (I will avoid being crude) you might want to rethink those shapes in the centre of the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted October 27, 2012 Author Share Posted October 27, 2012 Do you have any idea where to put the tail to make it better?Update of the logo : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BagelHK Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 Not sure what you could do with the tail, but I like the new placement of the black on the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
seancarter Posted October 27, 2012 Share Posted October 27, 2012 what sport would the Portland Red Foxes play and what league they be in if they were real team Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 what sport would the Portland Red Foxes play and what league they be in if they were real teamIt's for a hockey team. But I don't know for the league... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElTeduardo Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 what sport would the Portland Red Foxes play and what league they be in if they were real teamIt's for a hockey team. But I don't know for the league...How bout a thread for this hypothetical league Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tygers09 Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 Drop the tail, detail the eyes (add pupils) and you're good to go with this one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 What do you think of this : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 Much better, though the slit pupils look feline. Just a note for the future--leave your original works rather than deleting them and replacing them with updates. That way, both the readers and you can easily see the full development of your concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 I know it looks feline, but check this picture :http://tn3-2.deviantart.com/fs16/300W/f/2007/207/8/5/Little_Red_Fox_by_Nzeman.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 Wow, I never knew, very cool! Then I'd say your logo is perfect. Great progress over a just a few days. Next stop--a full concept! What sport do you envision this for? i see either hockey or baseball. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BagelHK Posted October 29, 2012 Share Posted October 29, 2012 Wow, I never knew, very cool! Then I'd say your logo is perfect. Great progress over a just a few days. Next stop--a full concept! What sport do you envision this for? i see either hockey or baseball.He said hockey, and I can't really see them playing anything else for that matter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexo Posted October 29, 2012 Author Share Posted October 29, 2012 Yes it's a hockey concept, and maybe I will make some jerseys soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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