cbaum14 Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 Hello everyone. This is my first post on here so be gentle.... So this year my high school lacrosse team is changing everything up. I designed the helmet graphics that were ordering, and now they want me to make the new logo. I came up with this sketch and im just looking for any feedback you guys might have. Also, some help with how to color the logo. Our colors are red yellow and white and our mascot is the flames. Here is the link to the sketch: http://s1359.beta.photobucket.com/user/cbaum141/media/CCF01252013_00000_zpsc3b95961.jpg.html?sort=3&o=0 Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rtrich11 Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 Unfortunately, I couldn't see it. The page was loading for a longggg. time. cafepress.com/artbyrichards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WizKid Posted January 25, 2013 Share Posted January 25, 2013 First off, welcome to the boards and its nice to meet other HS laxers like myself. I think the sticks should be longer in this case. Also, I'm in the works of making shooter shirts for the HS club team I play for. GrizzlyBlack Designs, UDC Firebird Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbaum14 Posted January 26, 2013 Author Share Posted January 26, 2013 WizKid, I appreciate the feedback. Its also nice to see other lacrosse players here. I would love to see the designs of your shooter shirts if you wouldnt mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Whittier S Posted January 26, 2013 Share Posted January 26, 2013 First off, welcome. A flame is tricky to render as a logo. The ideal is ambisymmetry, meaning that it's nearly symmetrical. You do a decent job with that at the top of the logo. However, I think that cutting the negative space more deeply into the logo is going to give it a lot more motion and make it look more realistic. Right now, it kind of looks like a misshapen spork. Also, cutting off the bottom of the logo with a plain horizontal line makes the logo look less organic and also contributes a bit to the spork feel. I'd suggest either rounding off the bottom, or letting it taper and trail off into a flourish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cbaum14 Posted January 27, 2013 Author Share Posted January 27, 2013 Thank you Whittier i appreciate the feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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