Windmill360 Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 A little after building it I realized it was kind of in the shape of a "V" so maybe I will incorporate it in the wordmark or something. Not sure what sport I want to make it for.EDIT: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aussie Ry Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 Great outline and wing tips! my only suggestions would be to simplify the highlight detail.Perhaps it could be for football? An American Football would fit nicely in it's claws. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattwillcox Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 I know you haven't really "stolen" anything, but it's not a good thing that I can automatically tell you've been looking at Davidson's tutorials. I really like what you've got going on with the head, and the neck highlights. I'd just like to see some originality in the way you render the wings.*EDIT I just realized who you are. After all of the that you went through with some of your other designs, I have no idea why you would think to do the same thing again... Portfolio Dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted February 7, 2013 Author Share Posted February 7, 2013 I can edit the wings, but I don't think its far off from what I was working form. Let me see what I can do.As for the highlights I was worried it was a little too detailed. Maybe I can make smaller shapes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 Both logos are pretty sweet. The vulture logo looks good, even in b&w. Kansas City Scouts (CHL) Orr Cup Champions 2010, 2019, 2021 St. Joseph Pony Express (ULL) 2023 Champions Kansas City Cattle (CL) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OlavoP Posted February 7, 2013 Share Posted February 7, 2013 you can try it for football. Can you try and add red? Black and red as primary color combination. I had a concept never posted about an vulture football team in Brazil because the only soccer club in Rio that don't have a football team is Flamengo and their mascot is a vulture, your is really better and I would love to see it in the colors. Twitter | Instagram | Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted February 7, 2013 Author Share Posted February 7, 2013 Here's an edit to the wing render. Yea I can think about making it a football club logo. I'll see what I can do about adding red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Windmill360 Posted February 11, 2013 Author Share Posted February 11, 2013 Well I went the Flamengo route. Here's what I came up with: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xodius Posted February 11, 2013 Share Posted February 11, 2013 I think your edges need to be sharper. What makes Davidson's logo so great is the great deal of power that the logo emits. The sharp edges, and sweeping curves make up the majority of the logo, which is what makes it very sharp looking. I understand you won't want to make it too similar his logo, but a I always feel that a bird logo, one that mainly consists of the wings, should be sharp and power. What you have now is good, but to take it the next level you need to work on defining the edges a bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OlavoP Posted February 15, 2013 Share Posted February 15, 2013 Well I went the Flamengo route. Here's what I came up with:My god I loved it, it's just great and could really represent the team on american football Twitter | Instagram | Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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