stimpy Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 http://img78.photobucket.com/albums/v236/jks192/whalers.jpgumm comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfannova Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 I'm liking the blue shoulders and the stripes. GREAT concept, except for.........the stupid whale. Get rid of that, you have a nice, clean look. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted June 17, 2004 Author Share Posted June 17, 2004 you dont liek teh stupid whale? aww man i love that thing..hmm any more comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
habsfannova Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 I'm not saying it's not cool....it just kinda goes against the flow of the jersey. Maybe if you removed the "ers" from it, it could help also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stimpy Posted June 17, 2004 Author Share Posted June 17, 2004 yeah your right...i just thought it needed something for teh sholders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puckcool22 Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 the striping needs to be much bigger, and get rid of the extra blank space Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDunn Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 I've got a lot to say here, but don't feel like I'm ragging on you. I'm just giving pointers.1. Crest logo is too big. It's one of those things you just kind of have to guess at and think about. As you have it, the logo would be monstrous against your torso. Look at other hockey concepts around here to kind of get a feel for what the right size is.2. Once the crest is made smaller, the hem striping can be, and needs to be, made bigger. Right now you've got all these stripes jammed into a little tiny space(on the green jersey especially). The same thing goes for the sleeve striping. You've got all these little lines in what's about the size of the cuff on Toronto's jerseys, for example. There's all this space in there, use it. A look at NHLUNIFORMS.com or RC's templates would be good to see how things are normally sized.3. On the white jersey, it looks like you're going for something like Edmonton or Chicago on the hem. 3 stripes, alternating colors. But these stripes need to be thicker. Each colored stripe looks to be about 4 pixels wide when it should be about 10ish, assuming that's what you were going for.I'm not telling you to conform to one set way of doing uni design, but there are some things you can work on, like what I said above, to make your stuff look cleaner and more practical. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brass Posted June 17, 2004 Share Posted June 17, 2004 Coming from the Whalers expert...not a huge fan of it, but good work. On 4/10/2017 at 3:05 PM, Rollins Man said: what the hell is ccslc? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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