BrandMooreArt Posted June 12, 2013 Share Posted June 12, 2013 this post isnt really about a uniform design, but about the presentation itself. ive been making some adjustments to how i present my uniforms on this style sheet and i think ive got something im happy with now. these will be used primarily in my portfolios and on this forum, so when presenting a lot of teams together i want to keep each one on its own page. anyway, id like to know what everyone else thinks? any critiques/comments welcome. just for the heck of it, i'll show you the Bears concept.heres the things i've included in the layout- primary logo- word mark- home/away uniform- up to 2 alternates- number font on home/away- helmet mock-upalso for reference, this is the layout i've been using for a while; trying to improve on GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drdougfresh Posted June 12, 2013 Share Posted June 12, 2013 Really clean, Brandon. I like the update! The one thing that sticks out to me (and this could totally be personal preference) is the old Revolution helmet -- I'd use the newer Revo one Fraser did. I need to get myself set up with an official template like this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 12, 2013 Author Share Posted June 12, 2013 yea i have all of Frasers helmet templates. its hard to choose one. the one thing i like about that one is its easier to work with, you dont have to skew/warp the logo to get it to look right. but that Revo one is pretty tough too GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEANS Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 I think the helmet sticks out too, but because it's a PS render and everything else in the presentation in vector. I'd switch to a vector rendering of the Revo.Also maybe add a little space between each uniform set.Nice work! https://www.andrewsterlachini.com/ or http://dribbble.com/MEANS1974 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 13, 2013 Author Share Posted June 13, 2013 I do have a vector side view of that same Revolution close to whats in your avatar Means. I will try that GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEANS Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 cool, I have a side version that's more realistic too. Let me know if you want them. https://www.andrewsterlachini.com/ or http://dribbble.com/MEANS1974 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marble21 Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 The home, away, alt text is less obvious on the updated version. I didn't notice it the first few times I looked at it. I also agree about the helmet as mentioned by means. UBI FIDES IBI LUX ET ROBUR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 14, 2013 Author Share Posted June 14, 2013 updated this with a vector helmet (which i should probably re-work a little, the face mask dosent look good when in black). the word mark area will usually be in color, not white GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vnardella5 Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 wheres the best place to go for that uniform template? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 Inkscape. And trace it. Not hard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vnardella5 Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 but why would i do that if there is a template? i just dont know where it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 14, 2013 Author Share Posted June 14, 2013 if you do a search for it it may pop up. i have all of Harrington's Ai versions. i could just email it to you GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vnardella5 Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 is their psd's?? if not no biggie, i just love that template...oh and very nice work too..i like the black on black alt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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