Blackhawks#9 Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 my first concepttheshl.b1.jcink.com sleeve logoI do not own the sleeve logo. font credit to typodermic fonts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MJWalker45 Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 For the numbers I'd go with something that can be red more easily, maybe the Minnesota Vikings "serif" number with the flourish meant to mimic fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 Vanilla Whale! In regards to the wordmarks; make the first and last letters both capital. EX: Las vegaS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
davidmiller5 Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 A jersey doesn't need the same logo on both the chest and sleeve. If you want a sleeve patch on the home jersey, I would go with your LV hat logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 Love the colors. Love the socks. A very nice start here. The type needs some attention though. Your wordmarks have a large ammount of kerning (space between letters) but are being crowded by those bars on top and bottom. If you insist on keeping those, equal out the space between everything. Tighten the kerning and raise the top bar/lower the bottom bar. You want all that space to be about equal. Thats visual rhythm.Because your type has so mich going on even with the numbers you should do more with the rest of the uniform even if its just adding pinstripes. The type is all very heavy but you have a lot of open blank space that looks dead and the whole uni feels cheap. GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted August 28, 2014 Author Share Posted August 28, 2014 For the numbers I'd go with something that can be red more easily, maybe the Minnesota Vikings "serif" number with the flourish meant to mimic fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdRice97 Posted August 28, 2014 Share Posted August 28, 2014 I like what you have going here. However, I would put the Firebirds wordmark on the home white and move the chest logo to the alt black. Just my two cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted August 28, 2014 Author Share Posted August 28, 2014 I like what you have going here. However, I would put the Firebirds wordmark on the home white and move the chest logo to the alt black. Just my two cents.I was thinking I would do thatI like what you have going here. However, I would put the Firebirds wordmark on the home white and move the chest logo to the alt black. Just my two cents.I was thinking I would do thatI may also do a pinstriped uniform too. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackhawks#9 Posted August 28, 2014 Author Share Posted August 28, 2014 Vanilla Whale! In regards to the wordmarks; make the first and last letters both capital. EX: Las vegaSLove the colors. Love the socks. A very nice start here. The type needs some attention though. Your wordmarks have a large ammount of kerning (space between letters) but are being crowded by those bars on top and bottom. If you insist on keeping those, equal out the space between everything. Tighten the kerning and raise the top bar/lower the bottom bar. You want all that space to be about equal. Thats visual rhythm.Because your type has so mich going on even with the numbers you should do more with the rest of the uniform even if its just adding pinstripes. The type is all very heavy but you have a lot of open blank space that looks dead and the whole uni feels cheap.New wordmark Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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