OliverP Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 I draw up this logo in my notebook when I was a sophomore in high school and i was really proud of it. Now i want to make it better i anyway possible. Give me some ideas on what should I improve. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GriffinM6 Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 I like it. The tops of the letters remind me of the tops of the scyscrapers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 I would thicken the outer line a bit, otherwise I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 yea, thicken the outlines and also the horizontal shading above the "Y" crossbar needs to be as thick as the rest of the shading (hope that makes sense!). Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted June 13, 2013 Author Share Posted June 13, 2013 Listened to your suggestions and I've also added an orange outer outline. Here's the update: Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
St Louis Cardinals Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 The outline on the bottom semi circle is rough. might want to clean that up #9 LSU vs. TCU Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrad. Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 orange outline is unnecessary for me.make the blue outer outline the same thickness at the outline on the outside of the ball, and you're finished. Red Goat Creations :: Graphic Design Solutions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 i think this is an excellent concept that just needs fine tuning a bit. instead of trying to explain it, i thought it might be easier if i just showed you. my paths arn't very clean here either, but mostly this logo needs a color application adjustment (and even a hue adjustment, your colors are looking really faded) and some stronger, manlier strokes GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MellowTheMyth Posted June 13, 2013 Share Posted June 13, 2013 Awesome concept!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mattr1198 Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 Looks goooood NYC x STL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funkatron101 Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 Listened to your suggestions and I've also added an orange outer outline. Here's the update:i think this is an excellent concept that just needs fine tuning a bit. instead of trying to explain it, i thought it might be easier if i just showed you. my paths arn't very clean here either, but mostly this logo needs a color application adjustment (and even a hue adjustment, your colors are looking really faded) and some stronger, manlier strokesI think OliverP's intention was to match the current color scheme, which looks pretty faded as is, IMO. The other reason why I think his version compliments the current primary is the gray being used for the perspective and I think it illustrates a NY-like skyline pretty well. I could easily see what he made being incorporated into a shorts logo or warm-ups. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted June 14, 2013 Author Share Posted June 14, 2013 Listened to your suggestions and I've also added an orange outer outline. Here's the update:i think this is an excellent concept that just needs fine tuning a bit. instead of trying to explain it, i thought it might be easier if i just showed you. my paths arn't very clean here either, but mostly this logo needs a color application adjustment (and even a hue adjustment, your colors are looking really faded) and some stronger, manlier strokesI think OliverP's intention was to match the current color scheme, which looks pretty faded as is, IMO. The other reason why I think his version compliments the current primary is the gray being used for the perspective and I think it illustrates a NY-like skyline pretty well. I could easily see what he made being incorporated into a shorts logo or warm-ups.No offense to Brandon Moore, i love his logos and concepts (damn i just sounded like Kanye West), but i was going for everything funkatron101 said. i went for the original colorways, i wanted letters to look like skyscrapers, i wanted to keep the original ball and try to keep it simple so here is an update so you can tell me is there anything else you would like to see or change. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrandMooreArt Posted June 14, 2013 Share Posted June 14, 2013 Listened to your suggestions and I've also added an orange outer outline. Here's the update:i think this is an excellent concept that just needs fine tuning a bit. instead of trying to explain it, i thought it might be easier if i just showed you. my paths arn't very clean here either, but mostly this logo needs a color application adjustment (and even a hue adjustment, your colors are looking really faded) and some stronger, manlier strokesI think OliverP's intention was to match the current color scheme, which looks pretty faded as is, IMO. The other reason why I think his version compliments the current primary is the gray being used for the perspective and I think it illustrates a NY-like skyline pretty well. I could easily see what he made being incorporated into a shorts logo or warm-ups.No offense to Brandon Moore, i love his logos and concepts (damn i just sounded like Kanye West), but i was going for everything funkatron101 said. i went for the original colorways, i wanted letters to look like skyscrapers, i wanted to keep the original ball and try to keep it simple so here is an update so you can tell me is there anything else you would like to see or change.no problem man, i wasnt sure how far you wanted to push it. but just making those strokes thicker makes a big difference. looks much better now GRAPHIC ARTIST BEHANCE / MEDIUM / DRIBBBLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OliverP Posted June 15, 2013 Author Share Posted June 15, 2013 i'm just glad you guys like it. Dribbble Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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