the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted July 9, 2015 Author Share Posted July 9, 2015 Great work, Cream!Take a look at the first post and see how far you've come!Thank you! Yeah I am happy with how it turned out. It's getting to be as great as it can be, you've nailed the eyes which were the only weak part of the logo. Nice work on this protectThanks! Thanks everybody for the help with the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted July 9, 2015 Author Share Posted July 9, 2015 It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Plus the blue pupils are harder to distinguish from the brown background. It almost gives the appearance of the eyes being glazed over, they just don't POP like they should. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.Thank you for your feedback. I politely disagree with your insight on the eyes and teeth. Colorado Cougars was a potential team name for the Avalanche and I always liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
timberwolf Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 Is it just me, sleuthpanther, or did you accidentally post that comment like 15 times. Could just be a glitch but your comments fill an entire page. Nothing on you, don't worry, I'm sure it's just a fluke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted July 9, 2015 Author Share Posted July 9, 2015 Is it just me, sleuthpanther, or did you accidentally post that comment like 15 times. Could just be a glitch but your comments fill an entire page. Nothing on you, don't worry, I'm sure it's just a fluke.I think he really just wanted to hammer his point home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jake3roo Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfectyou posted that 10 times. I counted. Â Â Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_grateful_ted Posted July 9, 2015 Share Posted July 9, 2015 More updates, added more fur and shadowing. Much more eye details.Any feedback? I feel this is getting close and really appreciate the help so far!And a close up of the Cougar itself:It's not bad, but it doesn't do much to Wow me either. The colors are pretty drab, it's not very dynamic, and the cat look like it's either yawning or trying to smile but just can't quite do it. Maybe hacking up a hair ball or something. I know that you've put a lot of effort into the eyes, but they still look off somehow. I notice that you tried to make them look moist, but now it makes it look like its about to cry with the reflective streak in front of the pupil. It really looks like it's welling up. Also the the teeth look too big for its mouth. Oh, and I'm not sure what you're reasoning behind the name was, but I don't think ''Cougars'' is the best name for a team. Could be referring to a sleazy women's organization.Anyhow, something to consider.I don't really think cougar has that immediate connotation, at least to me. The name is fine and if the author wanted some alliteration its perfect you posted that 10 times. I counted.I'm so sorry guys! The WiFi at the my house I was at was absolutely s***. I'm not sure why it did that but sorry to all! If mods could delete all that crap that would be great Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted July 10, 2015 Author Share Posted July 10, 2015 Playing around with non realistic colors: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TVIXX Posted July 10, 2015 Share Posted July 10, 2015 got to go with the brown,gold,dark blue version for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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