CreamSoda Posted June 15, 2015 Share Posted June 15, 2015 Hello!Not really a full fledged concept, I am simply working on a new logo for a cougar and wanted some feedback. What works, what doesn't, etc..Thanks!Most recent version (July 8, 2015): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted June 15, 2015 Share Posted June 15, 2015 I have two critiques: 1) Add pupils to the eyes. 2) Move the top left corner farther down and maybe round it out a bit. Other than that, it looks great! fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 15, 2015 Author Share Posted June 15, 2015 I have two critiques: 1) Add pupils to the eyes. 2) Move the top left corner farther down and maybe round it out a bit. Other than that, it looks great!I like the suggestions, just not sure how to execute the pupils... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logo-maker Posted June 15, 2015 Share Posted June 15, 2015 Nice start. The pupils in the eyes really help. A glaring issue I see is the teeth, they need more definition (sharping).Keep refining your work, your off to a great start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 16, 2015 Author Share Posted June 16, 2015 Updated the teeth and the eyes. Still not sure on the eyes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 16, 2015 Author Share Posted June 16, 2015 Or this guy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fouhy12 Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 I REALLY like the look of that new one. Great job. fouhy12's NFL Concepts 2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 16, 2015 Author Share Posted June 16, 2015 I REALLY like the look of that new one. Great job.Thank you, I appreciate the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted June 16, 2015 Share Posted June 16, 2015 I like the progress you're making with this. - Still needs a pupil though. - White fur in the nose and face area would help greatly. Look at the U-of-Houston logo for reference. - Shading improves the look drastically. I think the face needs a little more shading, though.- Don't know why, but the logo looks dated. Don't know how to help with that exactly except refine your lines a bit.Can't wait to see the finished product @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
micalpickle Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 That looks like it could be a Penn State logo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 I feel like you should sharpen up the logo a bit. in the more rounded areas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 17, 2015 Author Share Posted June 17, 2015 Another update. I am concerned it is becoming an illustration/cartoon over a logo at this point...or this guy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted June 17, 2015 Share Posted June 17, 2015 I took a look at some of the other cougar logos online and found that most of them had more of a defined nose area, so that may help yours a little bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 Thanks for all the feedback so far!I am liking the look of this guy:any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
H11K Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Thanks for all the feedback so far!I am liking the look of this guy:any comments?Great job on this so far! Looks better every time! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jmoe12 Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Thanks for all the feedback so far!I am liking the look of this guy:any comments?The blue slits on the eye are giving it sort of a crosseyed look. I'd get rid of them. Tremendous improvement so far, this logo would work great for Pitt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YelichGraphics Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Thanks for all the feedback so far!I am liking the look of this guy:any comments?The blue slits on the eye are giving it sort of a crosseyed look. I'd get rid of them. Tremendous improvement so far, this logo would work great for Pitti thought the same thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hettinger_rl Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Some small, round pupils and the suggestion of incisor teeth could help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CreamSoda Posted June 18, 2015 Author Share Posted June 18, 2015 Thanks again for the comments. Here is a version with the teeth and pupils added. And in PSU colors: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LAWeaver Posted June 18, 2015 Share Posted June 18, 2015 Oh-so close, my friend. His left eye (our right) needs to be adjusted. Move it to the right slightly and up so that it is touching the eye's outline, similar to how the other eye is. @loganaweaver - Twitter / @loganaweaver - Instagram / Nike Vapor Untouchable Football Template / Logan's Logos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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