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Maritime Armada (Rink)


JohnnyCowboy5

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Your wordmark isn't great. The sketch chalkboard font doesn't jive with the rest of the set. And setting both words in the same sized type does noting to emphasize either. You need to set up visual hierarchy.

Plus you spelled MARITIME wrong.

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I like this set, but the logo is insane. It belongs in an Art museum, not on a hockey sweater. Simplify it and this is really cool.

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I agree with what many of the above comments have said. The logo is way to detailed. It looks like a drawing more than a logo. If you simplify it you would have a killer design. The jerseys are alright. The sleeve stripes are good but the blue inside of them looks weird. If you took away the blue and just left the black stripes it would be a nice set.

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