Fictional Country: Dannian Premier League

[NoE38_Concepts]

It seems like a lot of people have fictional countries these days, so I guess I should post mine.

A while ago, I made a country called Dannia.

The capital city is Kabana.

Map:

Along with it, I made the Dannian Premier League.

This league has 9 teams.

Because I'm using paint, the graphics will be bad, so sorry about that.

The first team, the Kandres Waves FC, is coming soon!

[XenonDesigns]

Looking forward to it!

[soflo_sports]

Just curious, where do you come up with the names for the cities?

[NoE38_Concepts]

Just curious, where do you come up with the names for the cities?

I took names of real cities and modified them.

[NoE38_Concepts]

Here is the first team,

the Kandres Waves FC.

Their Colours are blue and purple, which are the historic colours of Kandres.

FYI: the part of the crest that says 'Saet' means Waves in English.

Crest:

Kit:

EDIT: I changed the sponsor colour to white, and added more contrast.

The next team up is the Kabana Flagbearers!

[XenonDesigns]

A few things:

1) Will each team only have 1 kit?

2) The sponsor doesn't contrast well with the jersey base, maybe change it to white.

3) I'd add some more detail in the back, maybe a player name or another crest in the back of the neck.

Otherwise very solid.

[NoE38_Concepts]

A few things:

1) Will each team only have 1 kit?

2) The sponsor doesn't contrast well with the jersey base, maybe change it to white.

3) I'd add some more detail in the back, maybe a player name or another crest in the back of the neck.

Otherwise very solid.

1) Yes, each team will have only 1 kit.

2) and 3) Good idea, I will update soon.

[NoE38_Concepts]

Here is team #2, The Kabana Flagbearers.

Their supporters call them "Dannia's team"

Their logo is the flag of Dannia in a shield.

Their colours are Red, Black, and White and are taken from the flag.

'Bairaqtari' Means Flagbearers in Dannian.

Crest:

Kit:

Next team is West Kabana FC!

[jmoe12]

Good start, this should be an interesting series

A couple of changes I'd make to the Waves

1. Make the badge more cohesive. Try to implement the ball into the wave some how, because right now it feels like you have three things stacked on top of one another with nothing to tie them together.

2. Add more contrast to your color palate, lighten either the purple or the blue to make it easier to tell them apart.

3.Try to work on making your purple stripes the same length

[NoE38_Concepts]

Good start, this should be an interesting series

A couple of changes I'd make to the Waves

1. Make the badge more cohesive. Try to implement the ball into the wave some how, because right now it feels like you have three things stacked on top of one another with nothing to tie them together.

2. Add more contrast to your color palate, lighten either the purple or the blue to make it easier to tell them apart.

3.Try to work on making your purple stripes the same length

Thanks for the advice!

Also, does anybody know how I can bump this topic?

[NoE38_Concepts]

Now that I think about all the jerseys and their similarities, I will introduce will be clash kits.

They will be the same design, but have different colours.

[NoE38_Concepts]

Here is Team #3, West Kabana FC.

They are the least successful team in the Dannian Premier League, Having never been in a higher position than 5th.

Their Colours are Red and Yellow.

Crest:

Kit:

Also, Here are the clash jerseys for the Waves and Flagbearers.

Waves:

Flagbearers:

[Whitefoot]

Spend more time on your crest design. The West Kabana FC crest is very poor. It has nothing that represents the only thing we know about this fictional team. We only know the team name and you used a script J in an empty roundel. You can do better. The crest is the most important part of a football (soccer) teams identity. Look at the crests for Major League Soccer, English Premier League, Bundesliga, La Liga, and Serie A. These crests will give you design ideas that have true meaning. Once you are happy with the design post it and ask for help to make it better. Once you have made it better, then design a uniform that represents the crest.

I would suggest changing the sponsor logo to a 2-D version of the Mercedes-Benz logo rather than a 3-D version. The number on the back is off-center and I would also make the crest a little larger. The collar on the back is not the same color as the front.