PantherXVI Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 I haven't designed since 2012, so go easy on me. Not completely finished, but wanted to get some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blindsay Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 Nice. I have a suggestion: How about him sliding into home plate with an angry expression? Im an isles,rangers,devils,Sabres,Yankees,Mets,Braves,hawks,knicks,nets,bills,giants,falcons,and jets fan. So? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Section30 Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 Looks really good, I do have a couple suggestions though. First off I would add a black outline where the red sleeves meet his hands. And secondly I would make the shadow on the back of the ball effect the red stitching on the ball as well as the white of the ball. I'd also get rid of the little holes in the outline between the hand and foot and the hat and mustache. Minnesota Amateur Hockey League MAHL Wiki Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FinsUp1214 Posted August 17, 2019 Share Posted August 17, 2019 Overall this is a very great start! I think it’s got some great potential and is on its way to being a successful modernization. A couple of suggestions I have in addition to those posted above: - I would take the weight of the eyes outline down just a tiny bit, I think it’s just a little too thick as is. - I would make the line formed by the jersey button front flow with his torso a little more, right now it looks a little caved in and seems to clash a little with the overall movement of the logo. Again, very great start! Keep going with it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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