zoneranger Posted May 11, 2003 Share Posted May 11, 2003 Thanks to everyone who suggested names for my fantasy team in Tucson and thanks for correcting me on the spelling of that great Arizona city. Here is the first of the concepts I've come up with. Any critiques are always welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted May 11, 2003 Share Posted May 11, 2003 I really don't think that cyan, orange and black go together. The logo is cool, although I'd drop the background circle and the gradients within the scorpions parts.My advice? Go with a black outlined, gold scorpion, with red highlights. I think it'd look cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 12, 2003 Share Posted May 12, 2003 completely agree with SyPhi, very well produced though GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling84 Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 I am mostly with SyPhi on this critique. You dont need gradients or that blue circle behind the scorpion.In addition, you have to be careful when you combine text and frame the image on either side. With one word being much longer than the other the symmetry is all thrown off. Better to stack the words vertically in this case.It's a very cool looking image though...very nice work. You can do a lot with the entire them you've chosen. I threw together some text you could use as secondary marks. I know they are crap...but for some reason the "T" and "S" spoke to me. Sorry. I only had like five minutes, but you can do what you like with them. The Official Cheese-Filled Snack of NASCAR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling84 Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 Ooops. Still new to this posting images thing.www.north18.com/images/scorpion_1.gifwww.north18.com/images/scorpion_2.gif The Official Cheese-Filled Snack of NASCAR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snowcap30 Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 sterling - i like number 2 a lot... great workzone ranger...id change the colors but other than that great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GMS1122 Posted May 13, 2003 Share Posted May 13, 2003 i like the 2nd one as well Sterling, nice job GMS on dribbbleErie Apparel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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