Frenchie Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 Some of you have seen my WAFA (Aussie Rules) team unis and given me valuable feedback that will be taken under consideration. (Thank You)Now I need more help with my wordmark.Most designer get to that point at one time or another where after staring at your concept for hours, you just can't make up your mind, actually you end up trying one more and one more...Before I go on and try 4 more variations (...not!) can you guys steer me in the right direction and tell me what works best?Thank you. @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 I'd go with the first one. It's the most legible.What works best is to not use Brush Script. It screams "locally silkscreened Little League uniform". Your wordmark is very boring as it is..."Toronto Lakers". I think you could have some fun with at least the nickname...maybe set the baseline to Lakers as a wave, or use a bolder font and then you can have a wave pattern running through "Lakers" like example #4.There are also a few "scripty" typefaces that are actually italicized fonts that might work with this as well. You can also use a regular bold/heavy/black version of a font and skew or slant it when all your other effects are done to it. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alphabet Man Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 i actually like no. 4 and 8 but to make it one i would say no. 4..... twitter.com/thebrainofMatt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scooter13 Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 I hate to say it Frenchie, but I like number 1 best. It is clearer. Maybe if the word mark was different the wave effect would work better. Detroit Dragons - 2010 ULL Gait Cup ChampionsDetroit Cougars - 2010 and 2011 WAFA Wills Cup Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frenchie Posted October 19, 2004 Author Share Posted October 19, 2004 Thanks everybody for the feedback, keep it coming...I maybe trying to be too facy about the wave.I think the third colour (Grey) is waht "dulls" it.I'll try more with just the double-blue, and the Navy outline.I'll be a little more patient and try more fonts.Thanks again. @Frenchie_TO Owner of the Rochester Americans of the MLH Owner of the Toronto Frenchies of the GCFHL6 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wcgslacker04 Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 God I hate Brush Script. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted October 19, 2004 Share Posted October 19, 2004 I'd say #1 is the most legible--but if you went without the grey--#4 or 5... Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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