iDonovan Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Well the board is finally back and I have been pretty busy those few days...here is the first one I am currently working on. We are just finishing up a few things and it should be good to go. This was not how I would have liked it to be, but the customer made a lot of changes. I think its OK, but the logo seems to be floating now, not all tied together.The third image was my original rough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 very very nice donovan. i like it, you are right that it does seem to be floating on the shield, that could have been tied in more, but ya gotta do what the client wants lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurricaneDavid Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 I assume that is supposed to be a polar bear? It's definitely clean, but it looks more like a dog than a bear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 I assume that is supposed to be a polar bear? It's definitely clean, but it looks more like a dog than a bear. Everyone, please welcome the new JamesCraven.How is that not a Polar Bear? It looks like a dog, come on you are just trying to be an ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDonovan Posted December 10, 2004 Author Share Posted December 10, 2004 Please....David show me how to draw a Polar Bear Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 The snout and jawline seem long. Maybe that's why it looks a little dog-like.The head definitely looks like it's floating inside the shield. There should be more shoulder/body lines underneath the head, so it looks like it has a body.The bear looks very excited to be playing hockey Nice big happy smile. Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurricaneDavid Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Exactly, the snout is too long and pronounced. If it was more sloped and shorter, it would look more like a polar bear and less like a dog. Donovan asked for 2 cents, so I gave him my initial impression. The first thing I thought when I saw it was "dog." Do you think everyone who has different eyes than you is an ass? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mings Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Exactly, the snout is too long and pronounced. If it was more sloped and shorter, it would look more like a polar bear and less like a dog. Donovan asked for 2 cents, so I gave him my initial impression. The first thing I thought when I saw it was "dog." Do you think everyone who has different eyes than you is an ass? Nope but when you say it like you did the first time it made you look like an ass. The second time you said it was the correct way of giving constructive criticism. Remember it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurricaneDavid Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 I'll consider that, but only if you remember that just because someone goes with their initial impression, that doesn't make them an ass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDonovan Posted December 10, 2004 Author Share Posted December 10, 2004 The first respond was worded a bit harsh.... I'll take your $.02 . A polar bear has a longer and more narrow head then your average bear. I took sometime in my design to make sure it looked that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slapshot Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 So, this is not your average bear.Kind of like this one... Back-to-Back Fatal Forty Champion 2015 & 2016 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Please....David show me how to draw a Polar Bear Like this! J/K... everybody cool it a little. One misworded comment does not a JamesCraven make.Nice logo iDono! Looks sharp. It's your style, and it really works! 'Course, I'd've chosen a less complex font for "Kings", but if the customer likes it, that's all that matters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HurricaneDavid Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Wow, that one is REALLY good. Of course, both of them are eleventy billion times better than I could do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sterling84 Posted December 10, 2004 Share Posted December 10, 2004 Aside from integrating the head with the shield more, which it sounds like is beyond your control, I'd like to see more mass in the neck. And I'm not wild about the use of the Ole English style type in "Kings". But that may not have been your choice either.All in all, wonderfully illustrated as per usual IDon.Just my $0.02. The Official Cheese-Filled Snack of NASCAR Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iDonovan Posted December 10, 2004 Author Share Posted December 10, 2004 The fonts were not my choice at all...I had something way better. I will actually try to finish and post my original plan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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