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Robert89

SA Rattlers...

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Lemme know what you guys think...

It's only a sketch at the moment...

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Good start. My suggestion, right side of the upper lip is a bit crooked, not level with the left side, even at this angle it looks awkward - you should be able to correct that easily.

I am looking forward to seeing your logo develop - great start!

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Thanks a bunch, and when I begin developement on this in Illustrator, I will be sure to make that change, thanks again...

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This IS constructive:

His tongue looks like a crowbar, as in it's forked on either end instead of it just being forked on the correct end.

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The only thing that's bugging me about this is the tongue. I'd rather see it going straight out of his mouth than out to the side. Right now, it looks like he's going head first into a windstorm.

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In order to fix the tongue I would move the rattler to behind the head to give it the room it needs to stick out the proper way.

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Change of plans, I went with something a little more simple...

Lemme know what you guys think...

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Uniforms to be out soon...

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