Robert89 Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 Lemme know what you guys think...It's only a sketch at the moment... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KCScout76 Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 Good start. My suggestion, right side of the upper lip is a bit crooked, not level with the left side, even at this angle it looks awkward - you should be able to correct that easily. I am looking forward to seeing your logo develop - great start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert89 Posted July 27, 2005 Author Share Posted July 27, 2005 Thanks a bunch, and when I begin developement on this in Illustrator, I will be sure to make that change, thanks again... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyclopsis Joe Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 This IS constructive:His tongue looks like a crowbar, as in it's forked on either end instead of it just being forked on the correct end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
officeglenn Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 The only thing that's bugging me about this is the tongue. I'd rather see it going straight out of his mouth than out to the side. Right now, it looks like he's going head first into a windstorm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 In order to fix the tongue I would move the rattler to behind the head to give it the room it needs to stick out the proper way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert89 Posted July 27, 2005 Author Share Posted July 27, 2005 Better or worse? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted July 27, 2005 Share Posted July 27, 2005 same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Robert89 Posted July 30, 2005 Author Share Posted July 30, 2005 Change of plans, I went with something a little more simple...Lemme know what you guys think...Uniforms to be out soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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