GeorgesL Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 I just drew this this week, this new secondary logo will be used on two jerseys only.C&C please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
See Red Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 I love that, it looks fantastic. Not much I can say in terms of how you can make it better. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nafsder2003 Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 I have to agree...that's a great logo. The only thing I don't like is the way that the circle is cut off by the light. I'm guessing that finishing off the circle made it look cluttered, so maybe extend the light beams so that the "jagged" parts are already outside of the completed circle. That way, we don't actually see the completed circle...we just asume it's there and it's being covered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nwtrailtrekker Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 COOL!! I always like lighthouse logos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BallWonk Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 I really like your idea for this, and mostly like the execution. This is one of those "Duh!" concepts, where after seeing it I now realize just how obvious it is that a certain kind of lighthouse lamp really does look like a baseball. Anyway, the nits I would pick. First, the roof, the blue thingy on top of the ball. I hate when people make fun of tall, pointy things for being phallic, but in this case the overly rounded roof makes your lighthouse look more phallic than a real lighthouse. Or, if not phallic, then it looks like the ball is wearing a French beret. Either way it's not good. If you could straighten out the lines of the roof and make the different sides meet with angles instead of curves, especially the point on top, it would look much more like a lighthouse roof and much less like a badly applied condom or a French poseur. Second, the stitching on the ball gets the perspective wrong. We're looking up at the lighthouse, but we're looking down at the ball. Not working. Flip the ball 180 degrees and the extra white space below the stitching will make the perspective of the ball match the perspective of the lighthouse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeorgesL Posted December 29, 2005 Author Share Posted December 29, 2005 I can fix the top of the lighthouse, and either fix the beams or shrink the circle.Anyway, I thought replacing the beacon with the ball was very clever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-kj Posted December 29, 2005 Share Posted December 29, 2005 Also, the stitching is generally going in different directions on the top and bottom from the perspective you're showing. Buy some t-shirts and stuff at KJ Shop! KJ Branded | Behance portfolio POTD 2013-08-22 On 7/14/2012 at 2:20 AM, tajmccall said: When it comes to style, ya'll really should listen to Kev. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GeorgesL Posted December 31, 2005 Author Share Posted December 31, 2005 Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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