thepablo21 Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 Hey guys, I have been lurking for a while and this is my first post as well as first concept. It is for my high school basketball team, the Patriots. I tried to make it kinda old-school but still simple and modern. I am also fairly new to Photoshop so it might not look the best, but you get the idea.Opinions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vicfurth Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 Actually, I love this. Powder-and-red is one of my all-time favorite color-combos. The logo's great...If you shrink the front number to about 3/4 its current size, and if you center the script, this will be perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepablo21 Posted May 3, 2006 Author Share Posted May 3, 2006 Thanks for the advice! I updated doing what you said and added an away jersey that is slightly different but still with a old school feel. C&C appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GameCock82 Posted May 3, 2006 Share Posted May 3, 2006 these are fantastic.... are you thinking of doing a powder blue uniform, as an alternate. For someone new to photoshop it seems you learned pretty quick, and made a very solid concept here. -s82.designs.webpage-Brilliams!Ownership -CFA: South Beach Sharks -NCFA: 2007 Beantown Bowl Champions; BNE Co-Champions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VitaminD Posted May 4, 2006 Share Posted May 4, 2006 Love the look, love the color scheme (one of our local high schools uses the same colors). One suggestion, though: a little consistency would go a long way.Examples:- numbering is drop-shadowed on one jersey, outlined on the other.- waistband is red/white/blue on one pair of shorts, blue/white/blue on the other.- neckline is similar to the waistband.- script lettering on one uniform, radial arc capitals on the other.To be honest, both styles work very well. I would think going in either direction would yield a great concept, but right now this feels like it's trying to be everything to everyone, and it comes off as a little unfocused. Just my 2 cents, I do like what you've got going here. "Start spreading the news... They're leavin' today... Won't get to be a part of it... In old New York..."In order for the Mets' run of 12 losses in 17 games to mean something, the Phillies still had to win 13 of 17. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepablo21 Posted May 4, 2006 Author Share Posted May 4, 2006 Alright, I changed for more consistancy. Thanks for the help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thepablo21 Posted May 5, 2006 Author Share Posted May 5, 2006 Added a court...any more opinions? Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spearhead Posted May 5, 2006 Share Posted May 5, 2006 Simple and nice. Just me, but I'd prefer to see an all-blue uni over the red. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
georgie6543 Posted May 5, 2006 Share Posted May 5, 2006 I like it. You've done a really nice job with these.The second set looks very sharp.The only thing I would improve is the three Patriots on the shorts & on the courts. I think that three is a little too much, one works just fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephen93 Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 wow ive been here for like 2 years.... ive posted a maximum of 6 times and have never once posted a concept... well thanx for making me look like crap... but really welcomeand i really love the concept... like vicfurth said, lightblue and red is such a great, and rarely used combo and overall its a great concept Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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