I Am A Flaming Douche Bag Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 Now dont be too harsh with me as this is my first concept. I made it in paint so it may not be the best but hey, I gave it my best. I didnt put a name on the back because I couldnt find an NHL letter set, the one on this site wouldnt open for me so does anyone else know where I can get some? Btw, I couldnt get rid of those lines going through the jersey, it ruined it so I just left them.I might add an alternate jersey later.C&C Please:)Calgary Flames Home Jersey:Calgary Flames Away Jersey: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NHL1016 Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 its very messy and needs cleanup also, try an use Roger Clemente's NHL fonts (just go to templates and click on it, it should be towards the bottom) [Coloring History Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AHcreative Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 It's very messy and all you did really was fill in parts of the template that was there to guide and direct you, not one that was made as a "Paint by Number". There is no nameplate in the back and the numer is off-centered.I didn't mean to sound harsh, but those were my opinions. Also, save it as a .PNG next time. When you save it as a .JPG file it tends to make the image pixilated and blury. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stampman Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 Paint is no excuse--I've seen much worse on Paint, and I've seen people use it that you can't tell it was done in Paint.What you need to clean up those lines is patience--it's not too hard to do.As for the concept itself--as a Flames' fan--I don't like it--1-too much black (But their current jerseys are guilty of this--at least the home ones are.)2-the black outline on the home unis makes it look like there's a smaller jersey on top of a black one--kind of disconcerting.3-The curved lines on the sleeves & the shoulders are jarring.So--take more time on your work, have patience.Clean it up.Try again.And as above--save as a png. Comic Sans walks into a bar, and the bartender says, "Sorry, we don't serve your type here." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeremy12 Posted July 30, 2007 Share Posted July 30, 2007 clean it up a little bit and they would look alright but the patter that you used doesn't look very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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