cyandlux Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 My friend bought a scooter and then another and hen her friends did, so now they have a gang or a club. They wanted a 50's diner feel. I tried to add an Italian feel as well. C&C thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 It looks like there's an arm coming out of the scooter rider's head.. I think it might be easier to see a scooter in that if you make it a side view rather than a 3/4 view. Maybe make the scooter and rider different colors and add shadows onto the scooter? Not crazy about the font either. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 well the 50s feel is lost here. The typeface doesn't fit with that theme, and your colors are way too cyan and magenta to be considered 50s. I think a simplified scooter on its own without a rider would do you better in this situation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fiasco! Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 I don't think there is a rider. I think the "head" we are seeing is the headlamp/instrument panel, and the "arm" is the handlebar at a strange angle. I totally agree with Brian on the colors and typeface, especially since the "B" gets lost and it reads "DOONDOGGLE" on first glance. Twitter | Design | LinkedIn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steve-O Posted December 3, 2007 Share Posted December 3, 2007 I couldn't even tell that was a scooter...I'd work on getting a different angle on the scooter then go from there and dull the colors a bit and change the font up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gothamite Posted December 4, 2007 Share Posted December 4, 2007 Same here - I had to look a couple of times to realize that was a scooter. The Green Bay Packers Uniform Database! Now in a handy blog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted December 4, 2007 Author Share Posted December 4, 2007 I think its too vertical as well, it was hard to work with that angle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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