cyandlux Posted March 2, 2008 Share Posted March 2, 2008 This one was difficult in regards to not doing what the other Florida Dolphin team has. I tried to follow their current and update it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gordie_delini Posted March 2, 2008 Share Posted March 2, 2008 one too many colors. keep it to three, max. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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RoughRiders9 Posted March 2, 2008 Share Posted March 2, 2008 Lighten the brown color then it's gold.Maybe a light tan or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Lighten the brown color then it's gold.Maybe a light tan or something like that.Thats not mine, thats theirs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scottysprings Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 Lighten the brown color then it's gold.Maybe a light tan or something like that.Thats not mine, thats theirs.It is a redesign, no? Why not change it up a bit if you see fit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 What's with the streaking dorsal fin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 What's with the streaking dorsal fin?It's a graphic representation of motion. They've been prevalent in comic-books for decades. I believe Jack Kirby referred to them as 'motion lines'. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SG30 Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 The tail looks off... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 The tail looks off...Yeah, I kinda thought that, too. I think one of the green areas needs to be white. Possibly gold. I'd go with the one to the right. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SG30 Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 you know what it is, a dolphin's tail is horizontal to their body, unlike a sharks, which is vertical. This one seems to be caught in between, if that explanation makes any sense. chucky's suggestion could help that I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted March 4, 2008 Author Share Posted March 4, 2008 I feel you on the tail...even though this is a "redesign" I was following their lead. Maybe I should have looked at it as an opportunity to make certain things right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GFB Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 What's with the streaking dorsal fin?It's a graphic representation of motion. They've been prevalent in comic-books for decades. I believe Jack Kirby referred to them as 'motion lines'.Well yes... but shouldn't there be motion lines on other parts of the dolphin? I mean, its not just the dorsal fin that is moving.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted March 5, 2008 Share Posted March 5, 2008 Not necessarily. I think that in this case, more motion lines would hinder the overall design, which is rather complex. They would definitely work on a simpler logo, though.By the way, the updated tail is great! The rest of that poor dolphin looks like a cyborg, however. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyandlux Posted March 9, 2008 Author Share Posted March 9, 2008 Less cyborg, I hope. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckymack Posted March 10, 2008 Share Posted March 10, 2008 Less cyborg, I hope.I do believe we have a winner, Good Sir. Sigs are for sissies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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