JayJaxon Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 This is my very first one. I would love to know what you guys think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1991 Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 as a loyal royals fan...... uh, NO. sorry, but maybe as a fashion jersey. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fjm Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 The colored sleeves and shoulders and thick blue piping make it look like a softball team's jersey. A nice looking softball team, but not what I expect an MLB team to look like.Black shadow on blue number is unnecessary and makes the number more blurry.You left a big gap between buttons 2 and 3. The original template you used must have had the name script across that, but you don't need that gap with your design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted May 22, 2008 Author Share Posted May 22, 2008 Thank you for your comments. As far as the buttons, I can move them, but that is just how the template is made. I knew this would not be a popular one haha. But I wanted to make sure I shared it because it is my very first one. Thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mania Posted May 22, 2008 Share Posted May 22, 2008 You left a big gap between buttons 2 and 3. The original template you used must have had the name script across that, but you don't need that gap with your design.Most(if not all) MLB jerseys, even if they don't use a wordmark that stretches the chest, have the space in the buttoning.Example(warning, large photo): http://img.diytrade.com/cdimg/560861/55735...Cubs_Jersey.jpg Off The Top Rope: A Pro Wrestling Podcast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delux247 Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 I really like them, but I'm for more modern looks rather than traditional and this is definitely the former. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imacav Posted May 23, 2008 Share Posted May 23, 2008 if you take away the colored sleeves, this has promise. also, i agree with the above comment on the shadowing. one thing i think teams need to go back to are solid numbers with either a single line to outline them or no outline at all. the black shadows are really played out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JayJaxon Posted May 23, 2008 Author Share Posted May 23, 2008 I made some changes based on what you guys have told me so far. What about this one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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