DrJack Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 I did these for my buddy's fantasy basketball team. He chose the name and the colors, and I did the rest. This is my second logo and jersey design, my first being the "Vancouver Clippers" which I posted a few pages back. Overall, I think this design is much stronger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkleton Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 I dont like the jerseys at all, I think that big curve on the side makes it look a bit twisted.The primary and seconday logo are good, they have that Hawaii feel to them. The best of the lot is the 'emblem'. I love the 'chill out' look it has, however...lazing on a hammock hasnt really got much to do with sea turtles...?As much as I like that logo I'd take it out of the concept altogether, it doesnt fit with the rest of the package IMO.Pretty solid overall though, maybe just have a re-think on the uniforms...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrJack Posted July 25, 2008 Author Share Posted July 25, 2008 I agree with most of your comments, Turkleton. The 'emblem' is my favorite as well, even though I know it doesn't fit with the rest of the stuff. I did that when my friend first said that he wanted his team to be based in Hawaii, before he chose the name Sea Turtles. I chose to leave it in however just because I wanted to show it off and receive some C+C on it.As for the jerseys, that curve is supposed to look like a surfboard, which adds to the Hawaii-ness of the concept. Maybe I missed the mark on that aspect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turkleton Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 I agree with most of your comments, Turkleton. The 'emblem' is my favorite as well, even though I know it doesn't fit with the rest of the stuff. I did that when my friend first said that he wanted his team to be based in Hawaii, before he chose the name Sea Turtles. I chose to leave it in however just because I wanted to show it off and receive some C+C on it.As for the jerseys, that curve is supposed to look like a surfboard, which adds to the Hawaii-ness of the concept. Maybe I missed the mark on that aspect.Ahhh...I see what you mean now you've said that. Again, I like that idea but probably not for a team named the Sea Turtles, and the way its been done kinda misses the mark.With abit of playing around this could be a really nice concept. Its kinda fun too, which I like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrJack Posted July 25, 2008 Author Share Posted July 25, 2008 I tried to keep it fun, it is fantasy basketball after all. If I can get some more comments, I'll definitely rework the jerseys, I just don't really know where to go from here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ldswoosh33 Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 I dont think that the orange color works very well....try yellow or light blue maybe Romans 5:8 NikoLazar.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ericjjyy Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 design is much stronger, don't like the jerseys though, go for something a little bit more conservative. On the emblem, i dont like the hammock idea, put like a ilsand type deal to give it an "island feeling." Also, try a less pale orange color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J23P Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 not much of a fan for the colors, but i do dig those logos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrueYankee26 Posted July 26, 2008 Share Posted July 26, 2008 the "emblem" looks like the sun is smiling trueyankee26.wordpress.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrJack Posted July 26, 2008 Author Share Posted July 26, 2008 Haha I see that, and the tops of the palm trees are like eyes. Purely coincidental, I assure you.Thanks for the feedback everyone, I'll play with the colors and repost these. I'll also play with the jerseys, but fashion design isn't my strong suit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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