chickenfish13 Posted January 16, 2009 Share Posted January 16, 2009 Hey Guys. I recently downloaded Inkscape, and it is awesome! Very easy to learn, and it's free. Here is my first concept off Inkscape, for a fictional team called the Saskatchewan Harvesters. The Secondary is supposed to be an angry farmer with a piece of wheat in his snarling mouth. Enjoy. and C & C as always. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spammy Posted January 16, 2009 Share Posted January 16, 2009 I wonder did you use the calligraphy stroke tool for all of this? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 16, 2009 Author Share Posted January 16, 2009 Most of it. I also used the bezier tool. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elliott Posted January 16, 2009 Share Posted January 16, 2009 Needs some major work, the detail on the grain looks messy and really not good, look at the Brewers for help. Its a good start on the guy, but the grain doesn't actually go between his teeth, which is a problem, and his hat needs to be revamped. Dribbble ... Behance Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 16, 2009 Author Share Posted January 16, 2009 Thanks for the feedback Elliott. Here is update #1, based on what you said. I changed the wheat to look kind of like the brewers, I connected the whole hat, and gave it a yellow fill, and got the new wheat through his teeth. Feedback on the teeth would be most helpful, because I am not sure how realistic it looks right now.More C & C Welcome dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chickenfish13 Posted January 17, 2009 Author Share Posted January 17, 2009 Bump. Anyone have any feedback? This is my first time using Inkscape, C & C would be very helpful. Thanks. dribbble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect Zero Posted January 17, 2009 Share Posted January 17, 2009 On his teeth, you need more pearly whites. The stem is going through his bite line, but then goes across his front teeth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigmike Posted January 17, 2009 Share Posted January 17, 2009 On his teeth, you need more pearly whites. The stem is going through his bite line, but then goes across his front teeth.Yep thats a flaw in this logo, also the black outline on him is wayy too thick, especially around the eye, looks like he got punched and now he has a black eye, that or he is super high! Check out my new NFL 2016 Series! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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