disman00911 145 Posted April 17, 2009 I'm still sorry about my last post. I hope the moderators deleted it so I could have a fresh start. Anyway, I did an Astros concept using the 1980s colors & a futuristic font similar to the 1994-1999 uniforms. It's not another recoloring job as I did it on a BLANK template. Click below to see it. Please critique. I promise I'll be good.http://disman00911portfolio.blogspot.com/2...os-concept.html 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BJBerthiaume 2 Posted April 18, 2009 The star streak is a little big and really clutters and distracts the front of the jersey. Other than that, this concept doesn't really have anything bad about it, pretty good job. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
disman00911 145 Posted April 18, 2009 The star streak is a little big and really clutters and distracts the front of the jersey. Other than that, this concept doesn't really have anything bad about it, pretty good job.So I should make the star streak shorter then. Thank you for your critique. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JayJaxon 182 Posted April 18, 2009 After looking at it, I think the star streak takes away from the whole concept. Maybe you should eliminate it all together and see what you have then. It would probably look like an updated version of the 80's uniforms (without the rainbow) I think you are getting there though. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scraw28 375 Posted April 18, 2009 just go with the Houston and Astros script and eliminate the numbers on the front of the jersey and it will look good 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BJBerthiaume 2 Posted April 18, 2009 The star streak is a little big and really clutters and distracts the front of the jersey. Other than that, this concept doesn't really have anything bad about it, pretty good job.So I should make the star streak shorter then. Thank you for your critique.Not necessarily shorter, but thinner. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
disman00911 145 Posted April 19, 2009 I did an update of the Astros concept after reading the reviews. I only did it for the home uniforms.http://disman00911portfolio.blogspot.com/2...ept-take-2.html 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Coast2CoastAM2006 394 Posted April 19, 2009 as a one off fan jersey you could buy at Target, this looks pretty cool. but i don't ever want to see the Astros walk on to the field with these. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
gueman 0 Posted April 19, 2009 Sloppy. Don't rush take your time. 0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
