Vidboy Posted August 6, 2010 Share Posted August 6, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Has2916 Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 I think your logo needs a white outline followed by a gold outline. And I think the hem stripes should match the arm stripes. Also, their current state of Texas logo was better than what you have here. A few tweaks and this could be better than the black sweater they have now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vidboy Posted August 7, 2010 Author Share Posted August 7, 2010 I think your logo needs a white outline followed by a gold outline. And I think the hem stripes should match the arm stripes. Also, their current state of Texas logo was better than what you have here. A few tweaks and this could be better than the black sweater they have now.I already tried that, it looked ugly. The gold hem stripes or the green ones?I think the star in the Texas logo would be a bit much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lancebridwell Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 I'm thinkin' that star on the sleeves would be a ninja star once the jersey was combined front to back. I don't think, because thinking implies uncertainty. Therefore, I KNOW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 That's awesome! I like it alot, I hate the basketball jerseys they have now. So awful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChuckDownfield Posted August 7, 2010 Share Posted August 7, 2010 It looks good, but right now I think it's a bit busy. The logo on the stripes, the shoulder logo, and the tv numbers kind of clutter the sleeves. I think if you moved the stars to the underside of the sleeves would make them much more subtle, and would be a classy touch. I think you should either lose the gold inside outline on the numbers, or put that gold outline on the shoulder patch, because now they are inconsistent. As far as the crest goes, I would either make the slate color on the star gold, or lose all traces of gold in the uniforms, as I think this is another consistency issue. Lastly, the gold on the sleeve stripes either needs to be thinned, or the gold on the hem stripe needs to be thickened. I think this uniform definitely has potential, but needs some alterations. GIANTS_REDSOX_CELTICS_LIGHTNING_BULLS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vidboy Posted August 8, 2010 Author Share Posted August 8, 2010 Thanks for the critique guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primal Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 I'll second Chuck's point on the crest - the 'black' star really doesn't work, the crest generally needs some more gold and white to tie things together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian_Idiot Posted August 9, 2010 Share Posted August 9, 2010 Awful. If you want to use the Star logo so badly why not come up with an edge-styled version of the original black uniform?Also, about your avatar: I'm not sure if you know, but Turco won't be wearing #35 in Chicago. It's retired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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